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Naked Subjugation

Naked Subjugation

Last night I wandered past your total disregard
And walked forlorn 
Stark insecurity amplified
Still I walked , my usual forbearance uncomplied

Upon furthermost the distance between us  elongated
The sustenance of forgotten stores inside me generated
I was venerated - nay subjugated
Of these morsels congregated
And fed me through those ink-black nights
In dew fall of the quiet
Inside unheard the rebel riots

As my breath became a billion
As my fears that I embraced
Loosed themselves and fearing fled
Melting in the murky bellows
Did I find my standing there...
Naked but for meekness laced
Forgotten was my fear
I needs you did not anymore
Nor your disregard this doggone day 
Not dejected as before
Only sin has me surrounded
And soon encircled disappears, decays
Unclothed in limped insignificance
Nothing said ..
So still your body lies

Copyright © Jannie Breedt | Year Posted 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/13/2017 6:02:00 AM
WOW to the first line, Jannie, it is a grabber and I found so much significance in each line that I rewarded myself with 3 reads. It is deep, the imagery compelling. So nice to read you again. Blessings ... CayCay
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Date: 8/12/2017 8:45:00 AM
I think tis poem is about courage. The courage it takes to give up addiction is superhuman. Especially in the face of doubters. I love that the person in the piece found freedom.
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Date: 9/16/2017 2:06:00 PM
Man o man.Patricia . I went and doubled that damn poem and cant delete it Thank you nevertheless. Its my favorite poem

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