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Shall I undress my wounds? Expose to you my darkest closet? Prey tell who would dress my sorry heart Inside of me There is fear Naked fear You can not feel Nor can you hear In snow drifts I sleep Dry eyes For I lost All the tears In the years Of Having Broken strings Deaf is the violin

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Date: 10/23/2017 12:11:00 AM
Trust me...... I'm a nurse. I agree with Jan, it's either tassels or blood. Either way, it's a bit cold to have them exposed like that.
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Date: 10/23/2017 12:12:00 AM
Being the romantic, I only saw the pain and sadness on her face!
Date: 10/12/2017 1:13:00 PM
Great poem, Arthur! So soul stirring on every level of awareness. A powerfully penned masterpiece. Going in the fave file for sure. Supernova poetry. Love and peace always.
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Date: 10/19/2017 9:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie!
Date: 10/10/2017 7:10:00 AM
Your violin is a beautiful metaphor!
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Date: 10/19/2017 9:35:00 PM
Thank you Sergi!
Date: 10/9/2017 8:16:00 AM
Such sadness plays a beautiful tune
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Date: 10/19/2017 9:35:00 PM
Thanks Tim
Date: 10/9/2017 6:47:00 AM
Dark deep and powerfully penned - love the pic too but am not sure if she's got nipple tassels on the outside lol lol:-) (the captcha is RUN) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/19/2017 9:35:00 PM
LOL @ Tassels!! :)
Date: 10/9/2017 4:26:00 AM
Wow, this is incredible! I really loved your last two lines, "Broken strings/Deaf is the violin," wow that is powerful my friend! You have delighted me to no end by your wondrous words of wisdom here this morning! What a spectacular piece Arthur, such an illustrious poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/19/2017 9:34:00 PM
Thank you Russell, much appreciated!