Naked Love

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 our naked feet feel the grass
  and our naked legs feel the
               flowers
      and the pretty weeds

our naked hands feel the pares
            and the apples
              the grapes
             and the rain

      our naked faces kiss
     and our naked bodies
          love each other
  until the naked moon meets
   the flaming constellations
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Godwin Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 3:46 PM
Such ripe fruit and lush nature - a delightful read ... CayCay
Chircop Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 5:20 AM
wow passionate and deep,did i ever tell you how much i like your writes-i did--:)talented James-yes you are--charma
Shango Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 7:24 AM
And love for its nakedness is no more transparent than the sugar on our tongue. This poem investigates joy and passion with beauty and delight. Love to you, friend
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