Naked Eye....

You ask to me dance 
We take the floor 
My hand locked in yours 
You pull me close
I stay inside your aura
A moment of such allurement
As your eyes show enticement
They send messages of seduction
My breathe you can feel upon your skin
My fingertips glide through your hair 
A sudden kiss to my lips I feel 
A joining of you and I
A dance floor to the naked eye
We move to the delights of a lovers night
The song carrys its words 
Soon we are walking through the city lights
A silence we hear as we know an encounter is near
The key unlocks the door a darkness takes us 
We are urgent up against the wall 
As we bring ourselfs to the floor 
We capitulate to our desires after moments 
Our seductive play is a drama set to poundings of want
A kiss on your lips sealed the tease 
For how this woman will please 
As now the encounter is oh so dear
Mind body and lust now holds .....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/14/2010 10:09:00 AM
another masterpeice driven by desire and fueled by fire
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Date: 8/12/2010 1:22:00 AM
A situation loving people would love to be in. A scene well captured and delivered >> James
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:48:00 PM
Clever title... setting off the seductive thrust of your poem. Nice development right through to the inevtable (?) conclusion. Well done Sarah! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 8/10/2010 11:54:00 AM
~ Smile, I am going to do my best "Beautiful Sarah Hales" not to clog up "Your Treasures" com boxes henceforth but, in-between every line, there will be a thousand more ~ "Dreamfully Beautiful Poem, & 'Yes,' A Fave" ~ As Always, "My Deepest & Purest Love to You, & All 'Your Beauty,'" John!:) ~ Smile, time for one more ~ ....
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Date: 8/10/2010 11:48:00 AM
Smile ~ What a beautiful poem and thought; almost as a dream that one could only wish and hope for; to hold within lifes light and, to never ever awaken from; this feeling of "Your Beautiful Heart Beating," next to ones own; "To Kiss Your Beautiful Lips," and to never let go ~ Smile, that's my own dream; sorry, couldn't help it dear, for once more, that's what "You Do, With 'Your Beautiful Soul'" ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/10/2010 12:14:00 AM
Good sensual poem ; )
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