Naked Exposure

this world’s full of haters ~ peel back a few layers to expose their craters

but you search for lovers ~ peel deeper we’re exposed under the covers
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Date: 3/8/2022 8:35:00 AM
Can see so much in these couple lines. Expose the craters of haters…sometimes there’s a big reason or are they looking to follow the crowd? Interesting that with lovers we can pull deeper, expose “under the covers.” Often people look for many lovers and think of variety but to unpeel the layers of one faithful lifetime spouse, to share “life” together, memories made, entwined with laughter and tears.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2022 10:45:00 AM
Indeed Kim you read this one exactly how I intended it, true love runs so much more intense and deeper than hate, the haters can rot in their self made spiteful jealous craters, I’ll enjoy under the proverbial covers any day of the week weekends included, cheers David
Date: 3/7/2022 3:16:00 PM
Very true, David. Have a great day! Bill
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/7/2022 3:35:00 PM
I keep peeling away Bill, hoping to find substance inside, cheers David
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