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Naked As a Chicken

Naked As A Chicken Clock on wall, Tic Tock Tic Tock Excitement in the air Where is my makeup Giggling, Laughing, Who are you Music Loud, Dancing, Swaying Just want a good beer buzz Ouch! Loud alarm goes off Bed Soft, wrapped in blanket Where are my clothes Written by: Debra M. Falgout

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Good Night

Date: 1/25/2013 1:07:00 AM

ahahahah opps dont mind the comment you must have wrote bout a midnight swing lol but still a nice poem

Debra Falgout
Date: 2/10/2013 8:49:00 PM

No swingii here, lol, think that is the only backlash to writer and reader, determining what is fiction or not, only writer really knows, either way, poetry writing fun, peace debra

Good Night
Date: 1/25/2013 1:07:00 AM

yea i didnt caught on the first time

Good Night

Date: 1/25/2013 1:04:00 AM

id be too cold at night to sleep naked LMAO nice job on the poem

Debra Falgout
Date: 2/10/2013 8:47:00 PM

I agree with you on this comment, too cold to sleep naked, poem written for contest but fun thought , lol

Michael Smith

Date: 10/8/2012 8:18:00 AM

Not a fan of Hiakus but, this not only well thought out brings a life lesson. Thanks for sharing. I for one detest alcohol knowing it only brings misery to those that partake of it.

Debra Falgout
Date: 2/10/2013 8:52:00 PM

never too old to listen and learn, thats why they call it life lessons, when writing poetry it can be real or not, its all in the eyes of the beholder, peace debra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2012 2:06:00 PM

DEBRA, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD

Debra Falgout
Date: 9/17/2012 10:03:00 PM

So much to catch up on when i log, on, thanks so much PD, love debra

Femi Joey Oloidi

Date: 9/17/2012 11:13:00 AM

hahah! lovely title, sweet poem, kingfemi

Debra Falgout
Date: 9/17/2012 10:04:00 PM

Like I can hear you laugh, I also laugh when I remember this one, thanks kindfemi

Ralph Mason

Date: 9/16/2012 8:16:00 PM

You poem made me smile :) Thanks you. warm thoughts, Ralph

Debra Falgout
Date: 9/17/2012 10:05:00 PM

If I can make one person smile everyday that makes me smile too, glad you enjoyed, love debra

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2012 7:52:00 AM

The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Debra. Love, Carol

Debra Falgout
Date: 4/19/2012 3:34:00 PM

I am happy to make your morning a little brighter, Thanks!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/18/2012 5:35:00 PM

you sleep nude? I am all about my pj's :) sounds like a fun dream, much better than dreams I have of being back in school and not having a paper done, or taking a test. ugh. i'd much rather have dreams like yours!