Debra Falgout Poet Haiku

Naked As a Chicken

Naked As A Chicken

Clock on wall, Tic Tock Tic Tock
Excitement in the air
Where is my makeup

Giggling, Laughing, Who are you
Music Loud, Dancing, Swaying
Just want a good beer buzz

Ouch! Loud alarm goes off
Bed Soft, wrapped in blanket
Where are my clothes


Written by:  Debra M. Falgout

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Good Night January 25, 2013 at 1:07 AM ahahahah opps dont mind the comment you must have wrote bout a midnight swing lol but still a nice poem Debra Falgout February 10, 2013 at 8:49 PM No swingii here, lol, think that is the only backlash to writer and reader, determining what is fiction or not, only writer really knows, either way, poetry writing fun, peace debra Good Night January 25, 2013 at 1:07 AM yea i didnt caught on the first time

Good Night January 25, 2013 at 1:04 AM id be too cold at night to sleep naked LMAO nice job on the poem Debra Falgout February 10, 2013 at 8:47 PM I agree with you on this comment, too cold to sleep naked, poem written for contest but fun thought , lol

Michael Smith October 8, 2012 at 8:18 AM Not a fan of Hiakus but, this not only well thought out brings a life lesson. Thanks for sharing. I for one detest alcohol knowing it only brings misery to those that partake of it. Debra Falgout February 10, 2013 at 8:52 PM never too old to listen and learn, thats why they call it life lessons, when writing poetry it can be real or not, its all in the eyes of the beholder, peace debra

Poet Destroyer A September 17, 2012 at 2:06 PM DEBRA, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD Debra Falgout September 17, 2012 at 10:03 PM So much to catch up on when i log, on, thanks so much PD, love debra

Femi Joey Oloidi September 17, 2012 at 11:13 AM hahah! lovely title, sweet poem, kingfemi Debra Falgout September 17, 2012 at 10:04 PM Like I can hear you laugh, I also laugh when I remember this one, thanks kindfemi

Ralph Mason September 16, 2012 at 8:16 PM You poem made me smile :) Thanks you. warm thoughts, Ralph Debra Falgout September 17, 2012 at 10:05 PM If I can make one person smile everyday that makes me smile too, glad you enjoyed, love debra

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2012 at 7:52 AM The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Debra. Love, Carol Debra Falgout April 19, 2012 at 3:34 PM I am happy to make your morning a little brighter, Thanks!!

Black Eyed Susan April 18, 2012 at 5:35 PM you sleep nude? I am all about my pj's :) sounds like a fun dream, much better than dreams I have of being back in school and not having a paper done, or taking a test. ugh. i'd much rather have dreams like yours!