Naked and Wet

She bathes me in water, scented with flowers
Not a typical way a man should so bathe
Yet, here I am naked and have been for hours
Her hands cleansed my body, I now feel so saved

The smile she gives me, this man it so makes
I feel like a king that is loved by the queen
For all that she wants, I am hers, so she takes
This is the best way to bathe or the best that I’ve seen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Beesley Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 2:55 PM
does she have a sister?or can we talk about a clone?
Shango Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Enjoy the splendour of the joy ... and may your inspiration grows forever with your enjoyment. Bravo on this write.
Bowen Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 6:39 PM
Hi Michael! This poem title urges readers to it....lovely ! You seem to be clean of any relationship blues....and full of relationship bliss. yeay...This is one of a kind my friend, Nicely put! God bless ya ~ Your friend at the soupie...jane
Winter Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 5:52 AM
~lol~ I am laughing at that first comment. So sensual, and I must agree with that last line. Love, Shar
Atanacio Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 5:05 AM
again sweet-- last time a woman bathed me I was five LOL
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