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Naked

Naked On an island in the midst of the crowded city street Traffic lights blink as colored tear drops hit the pavement One way signs all seem to point in your direction casting aspersions, via black and white arrows Sidewalks filled with throngs of gawking onlookers, mouths wide open, peering from the side of their faces The deepening sadness leaves you vulnerable to prying eyes leering at your flesh, exposed to high rise windows You hang your head, scared, chin against your unclothed chest when you see not one, but two shadows on the asphalt Suddenly you are draped in the finest cloth money can buy, shielded from the pedestrians who now divert their attention elsewhere Turning, you see a friend, naked, as his clothing now adorns your body and you feel safe with him at least for the moment and sometimes a moment is all that is needed

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Date: 12/28/2016 4:53:00 PM
to give all to another makes one nakedly pure, chris.. this is a deep write; much enjoyed.. huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/28/2016 5:17:00 PM
Thank you Nette, I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 12/28/2016 4:30:00 PM
A great poem. Well written with an educating content
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Chris Green
Date: 12/28/2016 4:38:00 PM
Thanks so very much Adeniji for your kind thoughts today.
Date: 12/28/2016 3:52:00 PM
When someone ends up unclothed to clothe a friend's nakedness...That is true friendship.I feel lots of protection and comfort in this poem...Its deep with a great sense of giving amd security to the one He cares for..Loved it.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/28/2016 4:38:00 PM
Thanks so very much sweet Charmaine. That is what I getting at with this poem, I just think you said better. :) A true friend would give anything, even his or her clothing to help a friend in need. I appreciate your wonderful comment.

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