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Naked

She warms me to the core. She caress me, brings a glow to my cheeks. I move closer I want her so near. She's not an old flame she's all mine. I have a burning desire to be close. Is she too hot to handle. Her smouldering beauty entrances me. She's fiery but I'm not afraid. What a scorching beauty she is. Now I'm struggling she's red hot. I'm just melting in front of her . oh, how I love a naked flame on a log fire. comp entry 11/11

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Date: 11/11/2016 12:24:00 PM
ha ha ha I love the twist at the end of the poem Stephen I like to use the same in my poems - great fun write my friend - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/11/2016 4:10:00 AM
A lovely piece, one can feel the warmth radiating from those flames.. its a beautiful piece.. ;-)
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Date: 11/11/2016 8:55:00 AM
many thanks for the kind words lewis lets hope the judge likes stephen

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