Naked

She warms me to the core. 
She caress me, brings a glow to my cheeks.
I move closer I want her so near.
She's not an old flame she's all mine.
I have a burning desire to be close.
Is she too hot to handle. 
Her smouldering beauty entrances me.
She's fiery but I'm not afraid.
What a scorching beauty she is. 
Now I'm struggling she's red hot. 
I'm just melting in front of her .
oh,  how I love a naked flame on a log fire.


comp entry  11/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 12:24 PM
ha ha ha I love the twist at the end of the poem Stephen I like to use the same in my poems - great fun write my friend - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Nyaga Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 4:10 AM
A lovely piece, one can feel the warmth radiating from those flames.. its a beautiful piece.. ;-)
Pennell  Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:55 AM
many thanks for the kind words lewis lets hope the judge likes stephen
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