Naked

What is naked? Without clothes?
Sky clad nightmare feeling shame?
Or deepest secrets all exposed?
Wretched, woeful, just the same

Stripped and helpless to them all
Friends and foes just point and laugh
Curled up in a foetal ball
Fragile façade epitaph

So do I yield? Give up? Withdraw?
Cower from the searing light
Let my guilt just ache and gnaw
Shrivel up without a fight

Or do I stand both strong and proud
Exhibit all! Here's what I've got!
Cry out, berate, exclaim out loud
I'm starking naked! Well? So what?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Damania Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Nicely written, Mark!
Martin Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Thanks Mrunali! :-)
Breedt Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Hi Mark, others wear masks ans fool only themselves. Being vulnerable and feeling exposed is your truth . It tells you also who your friends are. Nice write
Martin Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 12:46 AM
Thanks Jannie!
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Great write,Mark, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Martin Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Thanks Eve! :-)
White Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 12:03 AM
That is wonderful, exploring all the sorts of nakedness :) Congratulations.
Martin Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Thanks Darren! :-)
La France Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 2:47 PM
Mark congratulations on your wonderful win with this beautifully penned poem ~
Martin Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 12:02 PM
Thanks Broken Wings! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Congrats, Mark on this spectacular poem!
Martin Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Thanks Kim! :-)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:14 AM
So well done, congrats!
Martin Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:42 AM
Thanks Richard! :-)
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