Suburban Lovechild Poet Free verse

Naked

I sit here,
oblivious to worldly obstacles,
surrounded by air, and air alone,
presenting myself to G-d
as only He can see me,
Unashamed, uninhibited,
to partake in endeavors
that others flee for free,
observing subtleties that
can only be seen,
through the eyes of
a naked man.

(11/16/92)

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Njeri Hunjeri March 23, 2015 at 1:39 AM Well penned! #7 Suburban Lovechild March 23, 2015 at 7:02 AM Thx Njeri, too kind...

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2015 at 11:34 PM Just now seeing your response to me (I only see these reply things by accident!!) No, no insomnia. I get it a lot though. Part of getting old. uggggg

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2015 at 11:50 PM such an interesting little poem. Glad I found this one to see right before going off for the night! Suburban Lovechild February 27, 2015 at 10:06 AM Thx Andrea, I appreciate the kind thoughts...and please tell me that I/it didn't contribute to insomnia for you last night lol ;)