Kc. Lar Poet Free verse

Naked

Naked 
Baring all
Not just my body but
My heart, my soul
Trusting acceptance 
Cuz you said you love me
I drop it all now, -defences,  protections 
Emotionally naked
All my fears are on the table 
My inner most flaws and insecurities
You've made me feel safe it's ok to show all of me
I'm so not perfect 
I have scars 
I have bruises
Do you think they're ugly?
will you turn away?
How I love you, so much
So much that I want you to know me
Really know me, see me
I'm so not perfect. 
Will you love me,
Anyway
Or run away

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Skat A November 29, 2014 at 11:28 PM NC Lar, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Charmaine Chircop November 25, 2014 at 6:42 PM Welcome to poetrysoup.Such a great poem,you started with,Awesome!

Cindy Cayton November 25, 2014 at 3:39 PM Wow you said it all. I am feeling the same. I am at the point in truthfully able to love once in life. I keep wanting to run away. Go hide somewhere because the feelings are so foreign, and its scary. He won't even talk to me. Thanks for posting your writing today. I am not on here much. It helps to relate, and you helped me feel not so alone in what I am experiencing.

Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 3:10 PM could not of said it better golden beautiful pen

Carol Eastman November 25, 2014 at 12:54 PM First love? Great write...Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on an avatar or name to go to anothers poems. Leave a comment and that person will have a permanent link back to your works... Keep writing.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 6:34 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, KC - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nobody is perfect - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)