Naked

Naked

Bare and revealed to the world
Contours and hinges of your curves
Naked to a point of shame
No remorse to the imperfections showed
Naked not seen through glass

Revealed truths to its history of handling
Told stories encrypted on the skin
No colorful paint explains it better
Historic traumas laid out for glow
Baring fruit to the beholder

No clothing for the famished body
Unhidden ways of life
Naked I bared myself for you
Only for you to behold the imperfections
Lying on the ground blending my skin 

Here I am no lye to what you see
My name sad out loud with pride
Skin color not a prerequisite
Naked to your world and mine
Open to my ways of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:12 PM
mapaseka Prudence Tshuwa,,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Horsman Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 10:14 AM
such positivity,mapaseka, no one will argue with that, enjoyed this poem, and the content....
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 6:00 AM
A wonderfully well written poem :) - Have a amazing and happy new week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Pietersen Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 1:42 PM
ke rata tsela eo o ngolang ka yona... keep up the good work
Pietersen Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 1:36 PM
ke rata tsela eo o ngolang ka yona... keep up the good work
Lander Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 10:32 AM
bravo, a wonderful write, with some fresh line. No clothing for the famished body Unhidden ways of life Naked I bared myself for you Only for you to behold the imperfections Lying on the ground blending my skin
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