Naive Romance
So low gathered these puffy hues
Like unbuttoned coat of the king
Ready to astonish all
Bashed the cheeks of mountains there
And the roofs of poor and rich
Amid the downpour, a kid
Like a lonely star came out
To nurse his crazy fancies
And gossiping with splashes there
But his mother wailing hard
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