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Naive Lou and Clueless Cal

Naïve Lou has no clue about boys and their toys. She feels sure she can lure Cal away ANY day from old cars, gaming wars, casinos. She just knows he’ll prefer time with her! Lou’s his gal. Clueless Cal thinks she’ll be frequently there for him— at his whim. Facebook time will decline. Girls’ nights out will, no doubt, not be ceased, but decreased! ******* Should they wed or instead say “Good-bye” with a sigh? ****** Well, these two said, “I do” years ago. Blessings flow. Compromise shows how wise they have grown. Each has shown due respect, no neglect. 40 lines September 8, 2020 entered in the Threes, Please Poetry Contest placed 2nd Sponsor: Beth Evans October 1, 2020 entered in the Completely Your Choice (20) Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 9/9/2020 9:29:00 PM
Hello Janice … rising above the pack. Very enjoyable verse indeed Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/10/2020 11:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 9/9/2020 11:32:00 AM
Some people grow old together because they "have no other choice" and accept their "fate", but we all prefer hearing it is "LOVE"! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/9/2020 1:19:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Date: 9/9/2020 10:50:00 AM
Yes we are foolish when we're younger, but the lucky ones wise up when they grow up! Great contest entry!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/9/2020 1:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Michelle. Janice

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