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Naive Heart

My heart says
You too are anguished for me
An illusion
Presumptuous day dreaming
Of my ever naïve heart

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Poet Destroyer A

December 21, 2012 at 9:50 PM

Mohammad Yamin, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

Mohammad Yamin

December 22, 2012 at 10:06 AM

Thanks PD for your thoughtful wishes. I reciprocate the same. I wish you a very Merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous New Year. May your creativity and flow of pen grow from strength to strength in 2013 and after. Love

Lucilla Carrillo

December 13, 2012 at 9:00 AM

This is really beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Many blessings. Lucilla

Mohammad Yamin

December 14, 2012 at 11:06 AM

Thanks for admiring my Tanka Lucilla. I am overjoyed. Happy Christmas season

Debbie Guzzi

November 30, 2012 at 7:07 PM

very romantic! Light & Love

Mohammad Yamin

December 2, 2012 at 1:10 PM

Thanks for your very kind comments, Debbie. My wife says I shouldn't be writing romantic poetry at my age. I am in a dilema.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 27, 2012 at 12:51 PM

Oh for a naive heart, those days are long . Love this Mohammad xx

Mohammad Yamin

December 2, 2012 at 12:46 PM

Thanks Mandy for your enchanting comments on my Tanka. It is really encouraging. Love

Poet Destroyer A

November 26, 2012 at 8:38 PM

Mohammad, i never listen to my heart.. maybe i should... NAH... LOL... your poem is wonderful. love the good sounding beat coming from your young heart.. luv~ LINDA

Mohammad Yamin

December 2, 2012 at 12:24 PM

Thanks for your enchanting comment Linda. Am I again day dreaming or you really wrote 'young heart'? Love and best wishes

Richard Palmer

November 26, 2012 at 3:30 PM

wonderful write Mohammad

Mohammad Yamin

November 27, 2012 at 7:06 PM

Thanks for admiring my Tanka, Richard

Andrea Dietrich

November 26, 2012 at 2:59 PM

ah, the naive heart. Sounds like a very sweet heart!

Mohammad Yamin

November 27, 2012 at 6:53 PM

I admire your high sensitivity, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

November 25, 2012 at 6:28 PM

Naive heart..great topic for a tanka! [Hi Mohammad..in my haiku it is called a Praying Mantis ;) for the way it holds its arms appears as if in prayer BUT THANKS I so appreciate you reading my writesa thank carefully!] Light & Love

Mohammad Yamin

November 27, 2012 at 1:03 PM

I am glad you like my Tanka. Thanks for clarifying the word praying. How naive of me. Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 23, 2012 at 5:10 PM

Your heart is full of kindness - a very well written poem Mohammad. - Wishing you a lovely and relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin

November 23, 2012 at 5:38 PM

I am overjoyed to read your heartwarming comments on my Tanka. No thank you will be enough. Love

Sara Kendrick

November 21, 2012 at 5:18 AM

Yes, some are naive all there lives for one reason or another..Sometimes life opens eyes very early for some with some bad results..Enjoyed reading this expressive work this morn..Thanks for stopping by..The fields today are ripe or the most ripe unto harvest but the laborers are few..The cotton just hangs upon the plant waiting for the workers to show up..Sara

Mohammad Yamin

November 21, 2012 at 6:23 PM

Thanks for visiting my Tanka and your educative comments as always. I sometimes read them many times to reach their depth. This is why I wanted you to read my book and favour me with your views. I have an appointment with the Ambassador of Pakistan this Monday. During the meeting I'll present a copy of my book to her whatever be its worth.

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