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*3rd Place*
This or That, Vol 26
Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 July 13
Contest Judged:  2024 July 27
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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A fable of worth weaves a fair tale, that wealth possesses and not possessed. A quest to feign means forges a trail long jaded by the marks they unveil. Though blind seeker's minds a treasured chest. The hope for glory gloats jealousy, the more the merrier, too cliche, counting amounts to a specialty until idle growth reels entropy. Insignificant be, sensed doomsday. While the moment ill-timed takes pleasure as imbalance shortchanged one's fortune. Debt collectors knock at their leisure of court rulings, list your worth's measure. It is beyond the call of margin. Though street level, not truly gutter, err midst a fool lacks austerity. Low-life address as a deal cutter a debt paid in full hangs aflutter. A world minus dreamt prosperity.

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Date: 8/5/2024 2:58:00 AM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this, so wisdom-filled. God bless you.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/5/2024 3:33:00 AM
Thank you, Beata, you are Heaven sent, blessings. Aloha William
Date: 7/28/2024 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this marvelous piece, William. Loved it. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/28/2024 4:36:00 PM
Thanks Edward, my friend. Aloha William
Date: 7/28/2024 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement! Xo
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/28/2024 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Crystol, Aloha William
Date: 7/27/2024 9:09:00 PM
congratulations dear poet.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/28/2024 8:35:00 AM
Thanks thriveni, Aloha William
Date: 7/14/2024 10:48:00 AM
Nicely penned.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/14/2024 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Jay, Aloha William

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