Balveen Cheema Poet Acrostic

Nab New Grails-Infinitian

Nab New Grails

Learn from life each deed friends sweet myrrhs
Earn love and trust by less wants
Art of life an awed path
Reach out to the weak
Not now then when?
In rough times
Nab new
Grails


October11, 2015
Contest: Infinitian
Sponsor: Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

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Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2015 at 3:44 PM this is nice, Balveen. but you are gonna get docked for trying to separate friendships and awesome into two separate words! She is a strict judge. Try to change the words a bit. I know you can do it!! Balveen Cheema October 13, 2015 at 8:01 PM Andrea, can awe-some be used with a hyphen? Balveen Cheema October 13, 2015 at 7:57 PM Ok! I'll do that!

Alexis Y. October 11, 2015 at 8:10 PM Balveen, you did a good job!Best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis Balveen Cheema October 11, 2015 at 8:13 PM Thanks Alexis! It was tough! Hope Charlotte knows it!! Love, Balveen

Constance La France October 11, 2015 at 9:35 AM Balveen, this is beautiful and not easy to find those one syllable words, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, pasta ... Balveen Cheema October 11, 2015 at 8:07 PM Wings, it wasn't easy! I first made a blunder of the same sylabble but fewer words until I was corrected. Then I removed it from the contest and re-wrote this one. Thanks for visiting and appreciating my poem! Love