Robert A. Dufresne Poet Cinqku

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.                                         Sunday
                                       Peaceful day
                                        Family joy
                              Would have been nice- maybe...
                                        Next week.















inspired by Trish Shields

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Debbie Guzzi March 3, 2010 at 4:56 PM ahhhh so it didn't happen??? a few ways to take this! I like that...Light & love

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2010 at 7:30 PM haha, a good little one, Robert. Thanks for your gratifying response to me on winning in that small contest. It sure was fun to hear I won!! Let me see one more of your "older" posts now. Andrea

Richard Pickett December 30, 2009 at 4:30 AM Nice Cinqku Bob, I like this style as well. You have done a wonderful job with it. Thanks so much for the great comments on my work. You are a great friend,,,God Bless ...Rick

Colleen Bono December 16, 2009 at 8:20 PM Or maybe try this week.lol

Matthew Anish December 15, 2009 at 3:47 PM New form on me! Nice work and thank you for your comments

December 9, 2009 at 9:57 AM Interesting reflection for the reader to ponder about. I think we all have wishes for nice relaxing weekend. It doesn't always work out that way as you so aptly elude to. This is a poem everyone can relate to. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown December 4, 2009 at 8:42 AM I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Robert. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 3, 2009 at 5:23 PM Honest and mellow and truthful too.. Robert such a wonderful form of poetry too.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire December 3, 2009 at 1:09 PM How often we all take a deep breath, realize our limitations and say, "Maybe next week." Outstanding cingku, Robert! Love, Carolyn

Geoffery Mchugh December 3, 2009 at 1:07 PM Very mellow. Relaxing.

Carrie Richards December 3, 2009 at 12:09 PM An honest look at one's own life. Maybe next week....better things will come. ~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick December 3, 2009 at 11:59 AM Interesting write. Leaves me thinking. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Mary Meade Stephenson December 3, 2009 at 11:17 AM In so few words you have captured the essence of Sunday! Thanks so much for sharing~Mary