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. Sunday Peaceful day Family joy Would have been nice- maybe... Next week. inspired by Trish Shields

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/3/2010 4:56:00 PM
ahhhh so it didn't happen??? a few ways to take this! I like that...Light & love
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:30:00 PM
haha, a good little one, Robert. Thanks for your gratifying response to me on winning in that small contest. It sure was fun to hear I won!! Let me see one more of your "older" posts now. Andrea
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Date: 12/30/2009 4:30:00 AM
Nice Cinqku Bob, I like this style as well. You have done a wonderful job with it. Thanks so much for the great comments on my work. You are a great friend,,,God Bless ...Rick
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Date: 12/16/2009 8:20:00 PM
Or maybe try this week.lol
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Date: 12/15/2009 3:47:00 PM
New form on me! Nice work and thank you for your comments
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Date: 12/9/2009 9:57:00 AM
Interesting reflection for the reader to ponder about. I think we all have wishes for nice relaxing weekend. It doesn't always work out that way as you so aptly elude to. This is a poem everyone can relate to. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 12/4/2009 8:42:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Robert. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/3/2009 5:23:00 PM
Honest and mellow and truthful too.. Robert such a wonderful form of poetry too.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/3/2009 1:09:00 PM
How often we all take a deep breath, realize our limitations and say, "Maybe next week." Outstanding cingku, Robert! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/3/2009 1:07:00 PM
Very mellow. Relaxing.
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:09:00 PM
An honest look at one's own life. Maybe next week....better things will come. ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/3/2009 11:59:00 AM
Interesting write. Leaves me thinking. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/3/2009 11:17:00 AM
In so few words you have captured the essence of Sunday! Thanks so much for sharing~Mary
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