Caren Krutsinger Poet Acrostic

N I R V a N A

Neverland merges with Happily Ever After
I discover my own unique self-made Shangri--La
Reveling South Pacific’s Bali Hai
Verdant grasses, gorgeous crepe myrtles, ripe peach trees
Amid gorgeous colors not easily seen in this dimension
Nirvana, I feel amazed and awed by your grace and exquisiteness.
As beautiful and fertile place as I have ever imagined prior to today.

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Ann Peck March 29, 2021 at 12:53 PM Beautiful place, Great imagery! Was it Mitzie Gaynor who sang Bali Hai? Caren Krutsinger March 29, 2021 at 6:20 PM Yes I think it was!

L Milton Hankins March 28, 2021 at 8:02 PM Superb! I love how your lines expanded, which is how Nirvana should work! Nice imagery. Bali Hai is my favorite song from South Pacific. Remember how the screen changed colors during it? Caren Krutsinger March 29, 2021 at 11:22 AM I love that song! LOVE IT! YES!