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N I R V a N A

Neverland merges with Happily Ever After I discover my own unique self-made Shangri--La Reveling South Pacific’s Bali Hai Verdant grasses, gorgeous crepe myrtles, ripe peach trees Amid gorgeous colors not easily seen in this dimension Nirvana, I feel amazed and awed by your grace and exquisiteness. As beautiful and fertile place as I have ever imagined prior to today.

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Date: 3/29/2021 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful place, Great imagery! Was it Mitzie Gaynor who sang Bali Hai?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/29/2021 6:20:00 PM
Yes I think it was!
Date: 3/28/2021 8:02:00 PM
Superb! I love how your lines expanded, which is how Nirvana should work! Nice imagery. Bali Hai is my favorite song from South Pacific. Remember how the screen changed colors during it?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/29/2021 11:22:00 AM
I love that song! LOVE IT! YES!

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