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Premiere Contest WinnerMythology - the Gods Must Be Crazy


Gods of mythology from long ago,
commanded humans act within their law
or else there might be punishment, and so
man worshiped, followed, never to withdraw.

These gods ruled over sun, moon, rain, and wind;
and humans prayed to them for harmony.
Now in our world, they would be quite chagrined
by skies so full of our technology.

Our airplanes, jets, and rockets would incite,
and put them in a frenzy of despair
with terror in their skies both day and night,
and techno signals bouncing everywhere.

Apollo, Zeus, Poseidon, Jupiter
you would go crazy in these modern days.
The sun and sky and sea do now concur
your power has been lost to nature's ways.

No more your lightning and loud thunderclaps.
No more your floods from storms that you set free.
No more a drought to make the crops collapse.
No more the sinking of great ships at sea.

We have since learned about our universe;
that earth is reigned by scientific means.
New rules for skies and land and sea traverse;
No gods of mystery behind the scenes.

We now can travel land and sea, and oh,
the sky and outer space, our playground too.
Gods of mythology from long ago
you must be crazy since we've dismissed you.

Your paintings and stone statues all remain
and written history still stirs the mind.
Gods of mythology, it's clearly plain
you served a purpose to ancient mankind.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: YGGDRASIL ME
Sponsor: White Wolf
Judged: 05/20/2017

~2nd Place~
Contest: The Gods Must Be Crazy
Sponsor: John Lawless
Judged: 01/18/2016
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Lindley Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on your win! The Gods of old, were indeed needed. Now sadly far too often, man thinks he is his own god! Loved reading his gem my friend!
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:24 PM
Thank you very much, for your nice comment and congrats, Robert. Glad you enjoyed it; it was a fun write for me. Sandra
Michaels Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 2:43 AM
Congratulations on your First Place win, Sandra. Clearly a lot of work went into this! Well done. Regards, John.
Duet Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 10:58 PM
Congratulations, Sandra, on your well-deserved win in the contest. I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:25 PM
Thank you so much, Carole, for your congratulations and positive comments. Sandra
Wood Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 10:56 PM
Congratulations Sandra on this win. A great poem! - Dean
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:25 PM
Thank you very much, Dean! Much appreciated. Sandra
May Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 7:51 PM
The techno gods have won!..Congrats on your win Sandra
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Thank you once again, Joseph! Sandra
Warrior Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 7:37 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...a Poseidon of a poem...god bless...^WW^
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:26 PM
Thanks, ^WW^! I appreciate your supportive comment and congratulations! Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 7:17 PM
Love the write, Sandra, perfect in everyway... congratulations on your awesome win ~*
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2017 at 6:27 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for the nice comment and congrats. It was a fun write for me! Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Sandra, Congratulations - LINDA -
Fisher Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:38 PM
This is a great poem, Sandra. It certainly is amazing comparing the gods from old to where we are now.
Sergi Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Great poem, Sandra, Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Thank you, Ralph! Sandra
Williams Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 11:24 PM
Well done, Sandra. Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Thank you so much, Scott, for your visit and supportive comments. Sandra
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Wonderful win, Sandra.... hugs. SKAT
Haight Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Love it Sandra....style, form and a little bit of history's mysterys and science's compliances. Thanks for participating in the contest.
Haight Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Thank you so much, John, for liking my poem! I really enjoyed writing it for the contest, and I am so honored and pleased with the nice placement you have me. Thanks again, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 9:19 AM
I love where your imagination and talent travel. I appreciate you and your gifted pen very much; you both inspire and teach simply by showing up ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Hi CayCay, thanks so much for your uplifting comments and support! I am humbled, and so much appreciate your kind remarks. Hugs, Sandra
Sage Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Wow! excellent, now am sure this is good...great write Sarah
Haight Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Thank you so much, White Sage. Glad you liked it. Sandra
Scars Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Very good Sandra! good luck in the contest!!-luloo *smiles*
Haight Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Hi Laura Loo, thank you! Hugs, Sandra
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