Mythical Thinking

Mythical Thinking

In the beginning there had been the word…
She had spoken wisely and made believe
had been a poet all her life creating fiction
scripted parables about a primordial bang

Now she encountered writer’s silent block
yet pondered about her bestseller in waiting
quite ready to reap the harvest and sensed
she had to deal with considerable competition

She rested in the ocean’s tide among pebbles
‘Can I produce a stone so big that I cannot
lift it myself?’ she answered in the affirmative
got stoned on hash brownies and magic potion

A rainbow presided over a giant shibboleth 
‘This is a defining moment in history unfolding
I have created Socrates Darwin and Descartes
let the party begin and philosophy challenge’

‘They will believe to have created Me in their image’
Wishful rationale delusion psychopathology or faith
the jury is out there but ‘I appointed the judges
at the High Court of arbitration in the Garden of Eden’

She sensed there was nothing more to achieve
sat in her deck chair awaited Titanic battles
‘A bit more cannabis won’t hurt I am God after all’
but had been warned about relapsing dependence

When she was about to thread Camels and dope
through the eye of the needle injected some more
into self-proclaimed heroine of glory and fame she
shivered and fainted for the rest of day number seven
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Warrior Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Bad karma in the writers' block department...now & then...well done my blocking friend lol...love & light...^WW^
Neumann Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 1:30 AM
Thank you Winged Warrior. On day number Seven she rested...Should have carried on working maybe?
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 7:33 AM
In your mythical thinking, you created a story of someone who seems to think she has special powers. And she creates that magical world..yet falls prey to habits..and forgets day seven. A mysterious write, Kai. Let the creativity keep flowing!
Neumann Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 1:29 AM
I wrote about the concept of God and that is indeed mysterious...
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 2:59 AM
- A poet has many travels and mysterious thoughts, a great writing Kai - hugs // Anne-Lse :)
Neumann Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 4:03 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile. Life is a mystery unless we take it onboard. Many wishes, Kai
Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:48 AM
/cont/... It's a bit hard to understand what u r actually critical of though so I would love explanations. Kudos for the creative language in how u expressed. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:48 AM
/cont/... It's a bit hard to understand what u r actually critical of though so I would love explanations. Kudos for the creative language in how u expressed. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
Neumann Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 1:45 AM
Hi there, I know what I am not critical of and that is OTHER people's beliefs. Just looking at mine and trying to be funny in my own way. Kind wishes, Kai
Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:46 AM
From the science I have looked into there was perhaps a primordial Big Bang but bang or soup I have found enough evidence that it was created and boiled by God. This seems to be sb who is acting God, well she's headed for ruin. Humans should always stay humble and mortal to know the truth. Yours criticises the person in great clever parody and sarcasm wow.
Neumann Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 1:27 AM
Thank you S. I appreciate your thoughts.
One Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 5:56 AM
Writer's silent block, lol... Is this about someone you know? Seems like a confused lady....
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