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Mythical Thinking

Mythical Thinking In the beginning there had been the word… She had spoken wisely and made believe had been a poet all her life creating fiction scripted parables about a primordial bang Now she encountered writer’s silent block yet pondered about her bestseller in waiting quite ready to reap the harvest and sensed she had to deal with considerable competition She rested in the ocean’s tide among pebbles ‘Can I produce a stone so big that I cannot lift it myself?’ she answered in the affirmative got stoned on hash brownies and magic potion A rainbow presided over a giant shibboleth ‘This is a defining moment in history unfolding I have created Socrates Darwin and Descartes let the party begin and philosophy challenge’ ‘They will believe to have created Me in their image’ Wishful rationale delusion psychopathology or faith the jury is out there but ‘I appointed the judges at the High Court of arbitration in the Garden of Eden’ She sensed there was nothing more to achieve sat in her deck chair awaited Titanic battles ‘A bit more cannabis won’t hurt I am God after all’ but had been warned about relapsing dependence When she was about to thread Camels and dope through the eye of the needle injected some more into self-proclaimed heroine of glory and fame she shivered and fainted for the rest of day number seven

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Date: 10/18/2018 8:08:00 PM
Bad karma in the writers' block department...now & then...well done my blocking friend lol...love & light...^WW^
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/19/2018 1:30:00 AM
Thank you Winged Warrior. On day number Seven she rested...Should have carried on working maybe?
Date: 10/17/2018 7:33:00 AM
In your mythical thinking, you created a story of someone who seems to think she has special powers. And she creates that magical world..yet falls prey to habits..and forgets day seven. A mysterious write, Kai. Let the creativity keep flowing!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/19/2018 1:29:00 AM
I wrote about the concept of God and that is indeed mysterious...
Date: 10/17/2018 2:59:00 AM
- A poet has many travels and mysterious thoughts, a great writing Kai - hugs // Anne-Lse :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/17/2018 4:03:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile. Life is a mystery unless we take it onboard. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 10/15/2018 11:48:00 AM
/cont/... It's a bit hard to understand what u r actually critical of though so I would love explanations. Kudos for the creative language in how u expressed. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
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Date: 10/15/2018 11:48:00 AM
/cont/... It's a bit hard to understand what u r actually critical of though so I would love explanations. Kudos for the creative language in how u expressed. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2018 1:45:00 AM
Hi there, I know what I am not critical of and that is OTHER people's beliefs. Just looking at mine and trying to be funny in my own way. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 10/15/2018 11:46:00 AM
From the science I have looked into there was perhaps a primordial Big Bang but bang or soup I have found enough evidence that it was created and boiled by God. This seems to be sb who is acting God, well she's headed for ruin. Humans should always stay humble and mortal to know the truth. Yours criticises the person in great clever parody and sarcasm wow.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/16/2018 1:27:00 AM
Thank you S. I appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 10/15/2018 5:56:00 AM
Writer's silent block, lol... Is this about someone you know? Seems like a confused lady....
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