Notes About The Poem

Mythical Performance

Playing music of magical mythological sound
As if meditating to mesmerize those around,
Lion and tiger bow down being spellbound,
Legendary painting depicts myths profound.

Hands hold the lyre, strings echo the singer,
Mythical lyrics reverberate and aurally linger.
Shoulder muscles restrain his leaning stance,
Animals hypnotized, intently stare in trance.

Silent posture manifests solitude in his eyes,
Naked features divulge feelings they surmise.
Mystical potent image seeks union with God,
Intellectual persona leaves everyone awed.

He could tame the beasts and calm the rivers,
He could charm a snake without any shivers,
Guide and write of artistic human endeavors,
Create and sing musical themes lasting forever.

His bold naked appearance may reveal a strife,
A delicate mannerism makes it abundantly rife.
Engrossed in quest of music he perfected lyre,
Rhythm and lyrics conspired to artfully inspire.

Look beyond curiously to unveil the mortal,
Greek myths venerate him like an immortal.
A poet, musician, and a wizard of distinction,
Small group of doubters caused his extinction.

First Place
October 9, 2017
Painting: Orpheus by Franz Stuck
Poems that paint a picture 4
Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 1:07 AM
Wonderful write, Vijay, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Thank you Eve!
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October 13, 2017 at 10:35 PM
Vijay - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
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October 14, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Thank you Greg!
One Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:37 AM
Another wonderful rhyming poem, that flows so well.. Great story telling Vijay.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Pett Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 12:22 PM
This is an exceptional piece of poetry Vijay compliments the painting beautifully. :))
Pandit Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 4:47 PM
Thank your Roy!
Sathasivam Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 2:46 AM
Excellent. Very creative write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Pandit Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 4:54 AM
Thank you Ravi--appreciate your comments!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Awesome write, Vijay! Should be at top!!
Pandit Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 4:21 PM
Thanks again, Kim!
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October 10, 2017 at 7:33 AM
When Orpheus played his lyre all nature was charmed and animated at once. By the same token my friend, Vijay, your poem has mesmerized me! I am certain that god Apollo and the muse Calliope who were Orpheus' parents would be delighted to see such a tribute written for their son! A fave!
Pandit Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Your insight on this mythical tale is on the mark, and you are just the right person to speak to this with authenticity--many thanks Demetrios!
Williams Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 1:31 AM
A winner in my eyes Vijay, but good luck on this beautiful write...Maria
Pandit Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 6:06 AM
Thank you Maria--a pleasure to hear from you!
Muideen Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 1:18 AM
Really, this piece paint a vivid picture. It is like i was watching how he charmed he snake while reading it. A-well-done piece. Good luck!
Pandit Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 6:05 AM
Many thanks Afolabi--appreciate your comments!
Sands Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Excellent Vijay! Very well written! Good luck in the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 8:44 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Onclaud Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 3:37 PM
very creative and brilliant...you enhanced myth through this poem, vijay.., i bow!..huggs
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Many thanks nette--appreciate your comments!
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October 9, 2017 at 1:34 PM
- Excellent, Vijay - A winning poem in my eyes, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise! Appreciate your comments!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Sounds like a winner to me, Vijay! His nakedness so vital to the scene...you have depicted this so well. For sure, I will be offering you congratulations in the near future!!
Pandit Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Many thanks Kim--appreciate your comments!
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October 9, 2017 at 6:52 AM
Wow, what a spectacular write of this intriguing picture! I've seen several poems on this picture, but I believe yours hits the highest marks of all of them, you should place high! I really loved reading your amazing poem this morning! I just love the mystical prowess of this delightful piece, what a grand write, Great Work!!
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October 9, 2017 at 7:27 AM
It's a pleasure to read your lovely feedback and helpful comments!
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