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Playing music of magical mythological sound As if meditating to mesmerize those around, Lion and tiger bow down being spellbound, Legendary painting depicts myths profound. Hands hold the lyre, strings echo the singer, Mythical lyrics reverberate and aurally linger. Shoulder muscles restrain his leaning stance, Animals hypnotized, intently stare in trance. Silent posture manifests solitude in his eyes, Naked features divulge feelings they surmise. Mystical potent image seeks union with God, Intellectual persona leaves everyone awed. He could tame the beasts and calm the rivers, He could charm a snake without any shivers, Guide and write of artistic human endeavors, Create and sing musical themes lasting forever. His bold naked appearance may reveal a strife, A delicate mannerism makes it abundantly rife. Engrossed in quest of music he perfected lyre, Rhythm and lyrics conspired to artfully inspire. Look beyond curiously to unveil the mortal, Greek myths venerate him like an immortal. A poet, musician, and a wizard of distinction, Small group of doubters caused his extinction. First Place October 9, 2017 Painting: Orpheus by Franz Stuck Poems that paint a picture 4 Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 10/14/2017 1:07:00 AM
Wonderful write, Vijay, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/14/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 10/13/2017 10:35:00 PM
Vijay - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
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Date: 10/14/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you Greg!
Date: 10/13/2017 5:37:00 AM
Another wonderful rhyming poem, that flows so well.. Great story telling Vijay.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/13/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 10/12/2017 12:22:00 PM
This is an exceptional piece of poetry Vijay compliments the painting beautifully. :))
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2017 4:47:00 PM
Thank your Roy!
Date: 10/11/2017 2:46:00 AM
Excellent. Very creative write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/11/2017 4:54:00 AM
Thank you Ravi--appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/10/2017 10:51:00 AM
Awesome write, Vijay! Should be at top!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/10/2017 4:21:00 PM
Thanks again, Kim!
Date: 10/10/2017 7:33:00 AM
When Orpheus played his lyre all nature was charmed and animated at once. By the same token my friend, Vijay, your poem has mesmerized me! I am certain that god Apollo and the muse Calliope who were Orpheus' parents would be delighted to see such a tribute written for their son! A fave!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/10/2017 8:04:00 AM
Your insight on this mythical tale is on the mark, and you are just the right person to speak to this with authenticity--many thanks Demetrios!
Date: 10/10/2017 1:31:00 AM
A winner in my eyes Vijay, but good luck on this beautiful write...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/10/2017 6:06:00 AM
Thank you Maria--a pleasure to hear from you!
Date: 10/10/2017 1:18:00 AM
Really, this piece paint a vivid picture. It is like i was watching how he charmed he snake while reading it. A-well-done piece. Good luck!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/10/2017 6:05:00 AM
Many thanks Afolabi--appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/9/2017 5:42:00 PM
Excellent Vijay! Very well written! Good luck in the contest :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2017 8:44:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 10/9/2017 3:37:00 PM
very creative and brilliant...you enhanced myth through this poem, vijay.., i bow!..huggs
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Date: 10/9/2017 3:56:00 PM
Many thanks nette--appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/9/2017 1:34:00 PM
- Excellent, Vijay - A winning poem in my eyes, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2017 1:42:00 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise! Appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/9/2017 7:41:00 AM
Sounds like a winner to me, Vijay! His nakedness so vital to the scene...you have depicted this so well. For sure, I will be offering you congratulations in the near future!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2017 11:51:00 AM
Many thanks Kim--appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/9/2017 6:52:00 AM
Wow, what a spectacular write of this intriguing picture! I've seen several poems on this picture, but I believe yours hits the highest marks of all of them, you should place high! I really loved reading your amazing poem this morning! I just love the mystical prowess of this delightful piece, what a grand write, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2017 7:27:00 AM
It's a pleasure to read your lovely feedback and helpful comments!

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