Mythical Onset

Angels watch from sky
Seeing mysterious waves
Hiding eyes from doom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hilliker Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 8:38 PM
Nicely written Senryu. Keep the creative keyboard writing.
 Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 4:17 PM
What a thought provoking poem. The title works well with the piece. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 3:26 PM
Sad isn't it..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace