Myth

The old ones talk 
of a mythical creature
that dwells behind the grey curtain.
They call it “sun”
and speak of it as if
they had seen it
with their own eyes.

What an impossible fable!
A white ball
that can breathe fire
and dry out
the soggy soil,
and that shines light,
brighter than this gloomy glow?

Shivering, we huddle
close to the speakers
as if their fairy tale
could warm us.

3/29/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Lovely, Agnes. Very timely poem. Congrats for your well deserved win.
Otieng Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 9:17 AM
Congratulations on your win Agnes. This is a lovely write.
Krampe Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words, Samuel.
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:46 PM
wow, great sci fi. But what will replace the sun? All will die!!! I see you got a win with this gem. Congrats to you, Agnes.
Krampe Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Thanks, Andrea. It wasn't meant to be sci fi, but it simply felt like the sun would never come back - it has been raining for days.
Gentry Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Congratulations on your win! Reminded me Twilight Zone. Good write.
Krampe Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Walker Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Agnes, a lovely metaphorical poem which sings to my heart. Congratulations on your top placement. It certainly is well-deserved. Have a happy Easter. Sonia
Krampe Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Thank you, Sonia.
Duet Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 6:33 PM
What a unique write, Agnes. Short but full of enticing imagery. Folk tales are so much fun to read. I wonder if this one could even be true in light of the way people used to worship the sun.
Krampe Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:06 PM
Thanks, Carole - it simply felt like the sun would never ever appear again with these endless rains we've been having.
Onclaud Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:05 AM
an enticing read, agnes... the mystery of it all depends on our perception...huggs
Krampe Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Thank you, Nette.
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March 29, 2018 at 10:08 PM
Ooh I love this one Agnes! A fave. Fabulous poetic take on that feeling I have known well, and so expertly executed. I wrote on the subject, the only post I just couldn't edit out the "B" word without losing something. I wish you sunshine! :) xomo!
Krampe Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Thanks, Maureen. We got one lovely day of sunshine, and now it's back to rain again.
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