Mystique

Veiled in the mysteries of light black cutting off white masked a cottonwood whirl of life no debutanted call you said left, I thought right patience holding frightless on an eerie starless night your oceans brushing about my tree a sequoia rising high above the waters edge your wake ~ delicate a soundless melody that plays on for hours and hours in the breeze, the gentle tease the tide washing in and out to the wims of night the rustled leaves a bed of kings I, with you in grave and height stripping shrouds shearing fears climbing up the endless stares abreast a woodpecker pecks an undressed nest in piney wood I know and I should visions spy her spotted eyes true wonder where halos go to glow amid a moonlight high there's laughter in that sky air fills our lungs creating a thousand soulful songs we lay contented with the coming of the day gorgeous as that may be

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Date: 10/16/2020 1:10:00 PM
Her spotted eyes-Very original description.Very enticing poem.
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Date: 10/4/2020 5:13:00 PM
pfff....
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/11/2020 4:41:00 AM
lol. just sharpening the claws...
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Ts Poetry
Date: 10/8/2020 8:54:00 AM
Yep, beware of the cat's meow
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/4/2020 5:36:00 PM
https://youtu.be/NZ3Ck43m_ZY
Date: 10/4/2020 11:31:00 AM
a very sensual night in the moonlit woods..the Sequoia is magnificent ... great ending line :)
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Date: 10/8/2020 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Susan
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