Mystique

tell your fancy now
          morrow is not assured
                             on the fence 

07.08.18

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Susan Gentry

August 6, 2018 at 10:28 AM

Congratulations on your top win! Clever. :)

Moon Flower

August 7, 2018 at 8:05 PM

Thank you, Susan.

Eve Roper

August 6, 2018 at 2:14 AM

Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Moon Flower

August 7, 2018 at 8:04 PM

Thank you, Eve.

Augustus Black

August 5, 2018 at 7:50 AM

A decent one... nicely lined up. Congrats...

Moon Flower

August 7, 2018 at 8:02 PM

Thank you, Augustus.

Charles Messina

August 4, 2018 at 8:15 AM

Congrats on your top win with this well done senryu, Moon!

Moon Flower

August 5, 2018 at 7:49 AM

Thank you, Charles.

Line Gauthier

August 3, 2018 at 10:06 PM

Witty senryu. Well done and congrats on your top win, Moon Flower.

Moon Flower

August 4, 2018 at 1:22 AM

Thank you, Line.

Mark Toney

August 3, 2018 at 2:47 PM

Procrastinators beware! Congratulations on your first place win, Moon Flower.

Moon Flower

August 4, 2018 at 1:21 AM

Thank you, Mark.

Andrea Dietrich

August 3, 2018 at 2:35 PM

Sounds like a good one for the indecisive people. WEll done, and Congrats, Moon Flower.

Moon Flower

August 4, 2018 at 1:20 AM

Thank you, Andrea.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 3, 2018 at 12:04 PM

Excellent Senryu! Congratulations on your top win :) xomo

Moon Flower

August 4, 2018 at 1:20 AM

Thank you, Maureen.

Silent One

July 9, 2018 at 4:01 PM

Nice one Moon..

Moon Flower

August 4, 2018 at 1:14 AM

Thank you, SO.

Lyric Man

July 8, 2018 at 8:28 PM

Hi Moon, nice Senryu!

Moon Flower

August 4, 2018 at 1:12 AM

Thank you, LM!

Mick Talbot

July 8, 2018 at 9:51 AM

A senryu comment.............................................................. ............................many times i've said....................... ..............................you are a poetess................. ...............................no fence for me........................ ................................................................ Mick

Moon Flower

August 4, 2018 at 1:07 AM

This just makes my day, Mick. And let me extend my gratitude for the fantastic win I've received from this entry piece. ;) Thanks for the discernment.