Mystique

tell your fancy now
          morrow is not assured
                             on the fence 

07.08.18

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/6/2018 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win! Clever. :)

Moon Flower
Date: 8/7/2018 8:05:00 PM

Thank you, Susan.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/6/2018 2:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Moon Flower
Date: 8/7/2018 8:04:00 PM

Thank you, Eve.

Augustus Black

Date: 8/5/2018 7:50:00 AM

A decent one... nicely lined up. Congrats...

Moon Flower
Date: 8/7/2018 8:02:00 PM

Thank you, Augustus.

Charles Messina

Date: 8/4/2018 8:15:00 AM

Congrats on your top win with this well done senryu, Moon!

Moon Flower
Date: 8/5/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thank you, Charles.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/3/2018 10:06:00 PM

Witty senryu. Well done and congrats on your top win, Moon Flower.

Moon Flower
Date: 8/4/2018 1:22:00 AM

Thank you, Line.

Mark Toney

Date: 8/3/2018 2:47:00 PM

Procrastinators beware! Congratulations on your first place win, Moon Flower.

Moon Flower
Date: 8/4/2018 1:21:00 AM

Thank you, Mark.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2018 2:35:00 PM

Sounds like a good one for the indecisive people. WEll done, and Congrats, Moon Flower.

Moon Flower
Date: 8/4/2018 1:20:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 8/3/2018 12:04:00 PM

Excellent Senryu! Congratulations on your top win :) xomo

Moon Flower
Date: 8/4/2018 1:20:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen.

Silent One

Date: 7/9/2018 4:01:00 PM

Nice one Moon..

Moon Flower
Date: 8/4/2018 1:14:00 AM

Thank you, SO.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/8/2018 8:28:00 PM

Hi Moon, nice Senryu!

Moon Flower
Date: 8/4/2018 1:12:00 AM

Thank you, LM!

Mick Talbot

Date: 7/8/2018 9:51:00 AM

A senryu comment.............................................................. ............................many times i've said....................... ..............................you are a poetess................. ...............................no fence for me........................ ................................................................ Mick

Moon Flower
Date: 8/4/2018 1:07:00 AM

This just makes my day, Mick. And let me extend my gratitude for the fantastic win I've received from this entry piece. ;) Thanks for the discernment.