Mystified

There's a bright yellow ball up in the sky Can someone help me, I'm quite mystified Is it an alien planet With further advancement Contacting us with hopes our planet to occupy?

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Russell Sivey

Date: 7/30/2017 12:41:00 PM

This is one of my favorites of yours Jack! I really, very much, enjoyed reading this graciously hilarious piece this afternoon! You have painted a grandiose poem here, and I love it, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/30/2017 4:02:00 PM

Who really knows eh? Life's filled with surprises! Cheers, Jack

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/30/2017 9:05:00 AM

Ah, sweet mystery of life at last I've found thee//The great ball in the sky is colored pee//perhaps it explains//those acid rains//Umbrellas up! Advice from me. WONDER ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/30/2017 9:35:00 AM

So finally you have discovered what I've known all along!!! HA! I NO LONGER HAVE TO WONDER!!!