Mystical Serenity



Haunting voices from deep under 
            forest dreams alive with 
                         birds and water cascades 

Emerald reservoirs of moistened earth 
                sprinkled fantasies at the 
                     cusp of morning bliss 

A splash of dusk across the 
           meadows of my quiet mind 
                   oh what a precious find 

Trees that hold their secrets 
               deep within the crook 
                of an old enchanted fortress 

Mermaid songs by chill of Autumn 
                            right before the snow arrives 
                        white dipped paper butterflies 

Stirring the senses with mysterious breath 
                           pure mystique 
captivated by the essence of this moment 

                        I just am...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 8:54 AM
A lovely zen poem ~
Rose  Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:45 PM
I try every day to create a peaceful environment for myself and others Line, thanks for stopping by my poetry :)
Rolland Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 10:42 PM
mystical experience for me too, enjoyed dear poet Rose
Rose  Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:45 PM
Hi Yann, how lovely to see you here, hope all is well on your end, thanks for the visit dear
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 5:32 PM
a delightfully uplifting and spiritual poem, dear Rose. loved it, hugs, Sara
Rose  Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Glad you enjoyed the peaceful write Sara, hope your keeping well this time of year :)
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 1:09 PM
Beautiful & delightful!
Rose  Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Heh dear Abudllah so good to hear from you, hope your keeping well, thanks for stopping by my poetry :)
Narain Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 9:37 AM
This poem feels like a gentle whisper from deep within — a blend of nature, memory, and self-awareness. It’s lyrical and atmospheric, and I was drawn in by its sense of mystery and calm.
Rose  Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:43 PM
Yes Yay, the soul hungers for quiet moments such as this, in this hurried world it becomes increasing hard to do that, we need to persevere and stay vigilant thanks for the visit, :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 2:10 AM
Your poem is brilliant. Every image shows a deep serenity.
Rose  Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:42 PM
so good to hear from you dear Victor, hope your keeping well this time of year :)
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