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Mystical Rendering Bottled

Mystical Rendering Spirit in the sky clouds blue and stationary Thought and Universe 07/20/2014

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Date: 8/21/2014 7:39:00 AM
Wow! Congrats for the great write and win, Robert!
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Date: 8/21/2014 4:48:00 AM
Great write with senryu, Congrats. Robertg
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:04:00 PM
Nice work Robert, congrats
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:00:00 PM
This wonderful write has send my daydreams soaring. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/20/2014 5:23:00 PM
Love the spirit in the sky...congrats Tim
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Date: 8/20/2014 5:13:00 PM
And after a couple-a-bottles ........ interesting take on the theme.
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Date: 8/20/2014 5:06:00 PM
Wonderful win Robert :)
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Date: 8/20/2014 3:05:00 PM
It is indeed a mystical one! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on a superb, TOP of the class win! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:27:00 AM
A clever haiku Robert, the folks around me, felt this was one of the best. I agreed. Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/11/2014 8:15:00 AM
Back again wid big congrats on ur great win my friend!
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Date: 8/10/2014 1:19:00 AM
Heavenly haiku my friend Robert :) like it..:) kudos!
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Date: 8/9/2014 10:31:00 AM
Back again, Robert, this time with congratulations. have a nice weekend. // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/20/2014 9:38:00 AM
For the second time....CONGRATS.!!!!
Date: 8/9/2014 9:19:00 AM
That is pretty dang cool honey! Brings so many awesome thoughts to my mind, well done!!! :) :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:02:00 PM
Well don, congrats on your win
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Date: 8/8/2014 9:58:00 PM
Beautiful imagery to convey the thought, congrats on the win, Robert
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Date: 8/8/2014 7:36:00 PM
Lovely write, congratulations.
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Date: 8/8/2014 7:04:00 PM
Sure enjoy seeing this one. I somehow missed it earlier. Congrats for a great win.
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Date: 7/22/2014 11:58:00 PM
Like the way you got all this into the 'bottle' Robert..'
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/23/2014 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Joe. Poets bottle and battle with the best of them...
Date: 7/22/2014 1:06:00 AM
Expressive and lovely haiku Robert. Glad you are sharing these words with us...would not have done to keep them bottled inside you!:) gl in contest. // paul
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/23/2014 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Paul. I had to let them go forth , like a dam bursting ...
Date: 7/21/2014 5:35:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful ,, u cud bottle the mystical renderings,, gl in contest Robert!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/21/2014 8:20:00 AM
Thank you my friend. If only I could bottle them and be able to gift them to those in great need!

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