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Mystical Rendering Bottled

Mystical Rendering

Spirit in the sky
clouds blue and stationary
Thought and Universe 

07/20/2014

earthlifelightsymbolismuniversehaiku

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Hija De La Luna

August 21, 2014 at 7:39 AM

Wow! Congrats for the great write and win, Robert!

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 21, 2014 at 4:48 AM

Great write with senryu, Congrats. Robertg

Mark Trichet

August 20, 2014 at 9:04 PM

Nice work Robert, congrats

Scott Thirtyseven

August 20, 2014 at 8:00 PM

This wonderful write has send my daydreams soaring. Congrats on the win.

Tim Smith

August 20, 2014 at 5:23 PM

Love the spirit in the sky...congrats Tim

John Lawless

August 20, 2014 at 5:13 PM

And after a couple-a-bottles ........ interesting take on the theme.

Casarah Nance

August 20, 2014 at 5:06 PM

Wonderful win Robert :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2014 at 3:05 PM

It is indeed a mystical one! Congrats for your win.

Pandita Sietesantos

August 20, 2014 at 10:54 AM

Congratulations on a superb, TOP of the class win! Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

August 20, 2014 at 9:27 AM

A clever haiku Robert, the folks around me, felt this was one of the best. I agreed. Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 11, 2014 at 8:15 AM

Back again wid big congrats on ur great win my friend!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 10, 2014 at 1:19 AM

Heavenly haiku my friend Robert :) like it..:) kudos!

Paul Callus

August 9, 2014 at 10:31 AM

Back again, Robert, this time with congratulations. have a nice weekend. // paul

Paul Callus

August 20, 2014 at 9:38 AM

For the second time....CONGRATS.!!!!

Casarah Nance

August 9, 2014 at 9:19 AM

That is pretty dang cool honey! Brings so many awesome thoughts to my mind, well done!!! :) :)

D.W. Rodgers

August 8, 2014 at 10:02 PM

Well don, congrats on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 9:58 PM

Beautiful imagery to convey the thought, congrats on the win, Robert

Richard Lamoureux

August 8, 2014 at 7:36 PM

Lovely write, congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

August 8, 2014 at 7:04 PM

Sure enjoy seeing this one. I somehow missed it earlier. Congrats for a great win.

Joe Maverick

July 22, 2014 at 11:58 PM

Like the way you got all this into the 'bottle' Robert..'

Robert Lindley

July 23, 2014 at 7:26 AM

Thank you Joe. Poets bottle and battle with the best of them...

Paul Callus

July 22, 2014 at 1:06 AM

Expressive and lovely haiku Robert. Glad you are sharing these words with us...would not have done to keep them bottled inside you!:) gl in contest. // paul

Robert Lindley

July 23, 2014 at 7:25 AM

Thank you Paul. I had to let them go forth , like a dam bursting ...