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In the delicate heart of the loving, no other can compare to the Soft tender spirit of the one known as mother, what a cherished Rose of tiffany glass, fragile, beautiful but in strength’s resolve, A timeless piece of elegance in brilliance to outlast, and endure Beyond any stars’ shine amongst the heavens! Yielding, do these mystical rose petals of the heart fall, unto age, As a sheer fine crystal teardrop, sheading leaf by leaf of Emotional devotion given without a moments hesitation, Unto the child she’s loved, nurtured and protected always! Delicately pressed within the family photo album of remembrance, Is this everlasting exquisite blossom, ever tenderly placed, between Memories soft moments of self-compilations reflections, As if a stilled pond suddenly disturbed by a careless hand of Forgetfulness, behold the silent glass tear rippling on the Waves of memory, awakening your childhood laughter Shared together, or her smile shinning above thee, This woman for whom you called mother, ever enduring! Inspirations geneses of origin, the soil from which your Very roots were so placed within richness garden of purity, Sunshine’s warming influence, and moistures quenching healing Well spring from which thou’est sprung, give thanks unto she, Your mother the blessed, who gave birth unto thee! In clarity’s bouquet of beauty’s perfection, no other flowers Blossom with such kindred opulence’s, as these clinging Vines intertwined within each other’s deepest souls, Spiritual beings of affections devotional feelings, Daughters, sons and loving mothers! Within shelters protective cove called the heart of Humanity, their lies a sea worthy craft made of redden Mystical petals, rose slices, textured layers of impassioned Emotions, courage, strength, and tender loving, These are a mother’s true legacy! Prides monumental keepsakes treasure, these glistening Gems stemming from a mystical roseate, clarity’s crystal Tear droplets, shedding’s emotional petals, tenderly falling, Behold a mother’s loving heart, always to be remembered! BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN DEDICATED TO MYSTIC ROSE

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Date: 3/30/2016 8:01:00 PM
I love the rose globe picture. Cherl, a touching poem. I'm happy to read this dedication for Mystic Rose. She's a very lovely poet and awesome friend. LINDA
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Date: 3/7/2016 9:55:00 PM
Cheryl my dear wonderful, wonderful, I feel like a rose sometimes, especially when my petals start to fall and then i perk up again LoL. in fact my second name is Rose, actually it s Rosina and it is also my mothers name so what with that and all the roses in our garden my life is rosy, Lol. This is one beautiful write as all your writes are, take care my dearest friend..........Vera.x
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Date: 3/5/2016 10:36:00 PM
i like you the most in the soup. awesome imagery words. great ur doing injustice to your poems by posting the pictures in my humble opinion
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Date: 3/5/2016 5:01:00 PM
You certainly are on a roll today Cherl, and yes the poem is befitting of it's intended.. awesome to read, glad i'm the first..
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