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Mystic Trail

A trace of hazy mist, I pace in pearly tryst. My mind in loops of night, to find solace in light. Milky way curls to sing, hopes sway in silver spring. At dawn a trail of dreams, I yawn as my heart beams. June 30, 2020 Verses In Essence - 8 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May ~Winner: 2nd Place

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John Watt

Date: 7/12/2020 7:55:00 PM

I love your words, Aditi. Especially when I come back to reread them and peel away layers of depth and meaning and poetic craft. Congratulations on your win, my dear friend. Blessings ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:34:00 AM

I am really thankful that you love my words so much dear friend. Thank you for your kind appreciation John. Always a blessing to read from you :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2020 3:59:00 AM

Wow, Aditi, a difficult challenge that you met easily and gracefully, my compliments for your efforts and WIN, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:33:00 AM

I am glad you loved my words dear friend. Thank you for your kind wishes William :) Blessings!

Joseph May

Date: 7/11/2020 3:13:00 PM

Lovely write Aditi, Congrats on your win..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:32:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation and for my placement in your contest Joseph :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2020 2:03:00 PM

Utterly gorgeous. Congrats on the win.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:32:00 AM

Glad you loved it Andrea. Thanks for your appreciation :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/11/2020 1:53:00 PM

Aditi, this is a lovely WINNING poem! Janice

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 8:32:00 AM

Thank you so much Janice :) Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/11/2020 12:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day with blessings.........

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 7:59:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by to appreciate my words Paul. Blessings to you :)

John Watt

Date: 7/3/2020 6:11:00 PM

Aditi, a very nice distillation of that busy mind of yours finally settling down to a restful, dreamy sleep. Very well done, I wish you all the best in the essence contest ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:23:00 PM

I am glad you love my words dear friend. Thank you for your kind appreciation :) Blessings

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/2/2020 1:32:00 PM

Uplifting!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:22:00 PM

Thank you Kim :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/2/2020 9:56:00 AM

Great entry Aditi...another winner!...best wishes...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:22:00 PM

Honored by your warmest wishes WW ^_^ Blessings and hugs. Thank you for your appreciation :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 7/2/2020 6:19:00 AM

lovely images...I felt as though I was in the fog awaiting for it to lift and reveal the beauty that follows... nicely penned!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:22:00 PM

I am so glad you loved my words Sandra :) Thank you for your kind wishes :) Blessings and love

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/2/2020 2:58:00 AM

Ah so delicate and pretty Adti. Well done.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:21:00 PM

Thank you for your kind appreciation Caren. Much love :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/1/2020 6:48:00 PM

Sweetly and elegantly penned, Aditi. Superb contest entry. Best wishes, Gershon

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:21:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit and appreciation Gershon. Blessings :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/1/2020 1:07:00 PM

May your beautiful heart always beam on, thank you for sharing, blessings xo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/4/2020 2:20:00 PM

Thank you for your loving words. Blessings and love :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/1/2020 3:29:00 AM

Lovely rhymes that lift a heart! Keep pouring your poetic marvel dear Aditi!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/1/2020 8:01:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and gracious appreciation dear friend. Blessings and love :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 6/30/2020 10:25:00 PM

as i walk through the fog....i hear the chirping of a frog....and as i look up to the stars....Heaven's Gates Have Open Bars....then i look within myself....and i dont consider death....rather all i see is Life....so i will make it through this strife....very inspiring write aditi....

Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/1/2020 12:00:00 AM

Thanks for such a beautiful comment of inspirational words Eric. Keep writing and inspiring. Blessings!

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/30/2020 1:47:00 PM

A WHIMSICAL AND VERY UPLIFTING PIECE MY FRIEND. Like a cool breeze on a hot day. A fav.. God bless..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/30/2020 2:48:00 PM

Glad you love my words Robert. Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation and for the fave! Blessings :)