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Mystic Rose

MYSTIC ROSE

Muses sent via conquest.
You have your desire.
Squaddie of a definite stance
This you would deny.
Is it the way I interweave
Crusading my cause?

Rousing your intellect seem to be not that hard.
Ornery is a word I dare not apply.
So I enter your challenges with a purpose in mind.
Every gale I have partaken, I seem to always leave denied.

Mystic Rose, you are highly favored.
I like the ideals you compile.
So I will enter those that captures the signs of the times.
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Penned January 30, 2015!

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 11:23:00 PM

Verlena, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/6/2016 5:16:00 AM

Belated Thanks... Verlena

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2015 11:59:00 PM

Mystic Rose is a treasure here. Glad to see her paid tribute by you, Verlena. Was it in the one contest recently judged about writers? I hope so. i see Jan's congrats here so i echo Congrats to you!!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/6/2016 5:17:00 AM

Belated Thanks... Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 2/11/2015 6:53:00 PM

A wonderful tribute Verlena – many congratulations on your win Hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/6/2016 5:17:00 AM

Belated Thanks... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/7/2015 4:16:00 PM

I thought I would take another look at your majestic Rose!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/7/2015 8:12:00 PM

I am honored... Verlena

Paul Callus

Date: 2/7/2015 7:42:00 AM

Lovely tribute to a lovely lady, Verlena. As to contests...taking part in what inspires us make much sense, though time does not always permit entering. // paul

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/7/2015 3:11:00 PM

Thanks Paul for your insightful remarks. Mystic Rose contests are quite intriguing. Verlena

Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2015 7:21:00 AM

You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/6/2015 3:16:00 PM

Thanks Funom for your awesome response. Verlena

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2015 4:57:00 PM

Good advice for PS poets. A well penned statement.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/5/2015 5:22:00 PM

Thanks M.L. for your awesome response. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/2/2015 9:19:00 AM

She is indeed highly Favored. You made an excellent choice.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/2/2015 3:04:00 PM

Thanks Richard for your awesome response. Verlena

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/1/2015 10:54:00 AM

Thanks Rajat for your super-awesome response. Verlena

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/1/2015 7:44:00 AM

Vienna is a great soul great poet great inspiration for all.Lovely tribute to her.Love "Squaddie of a definite stance"loved this line. Verlena well done. Regards >rajat

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/1/2015 11:16:00 AM

Thanks Rajat for your super-awesome response. Verlena

Constance La France

Date: 1/31/2015 9:28:00 AM

Verlena, you have indeed penned a beautiful tribute to an incredible poet, well done and thanks for my wonderful placement in your most recent contest, I am very honoured ~~

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 1/31/2015 1:16:00 PM

Thanks Broken Wings for your superb response. Verlena