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Mystic Rose

Mystic Rose ( Acostic ) M...Malice - is not in your heart. Y...Young at heart - you are. S...Silent - sometimes you have to be. T...Teacher to many - you have been. I...Imagine - all the good you can do. C...Capricious - you are not. R...Rose - a very dellecate flower - you are. O...Observer - you always are. S...Someone captured your heart. E...Embrace life and be happy... o4/10/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: This is a dedication to a very nice Lady here in Poetry Soup One that you should know.

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Edward Orozco

Date: 6/14/2013 10:07:00 PM

Beautiful simply beautiful.- Edward

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/23/2013 1:19:00 PM

Beautiful dedicated poem beautifully worded. Loved always, bl

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/14/2013 7:11:00 PM

Such a lovely dedication! I am sure she is delighted to receive it!! Best wishes, Keith

Len Gasun

Date: 4/13/2013 11:32:00 AM

This is so sweet my very dear friend Lucilla! I extremely love this one again. Another wonderful dedication of yours & excellent acrostic as always! Wish you all the best and thanks a lot for your precious time reading my latest poems. I tried to clarify the fact about the great wall being seen from the outer space but, from the information I've read, it isn't true. So, I wrote it based from my experience ;)). Thanks a lot again for everything!God bless my dear Lucy! love lots, Leonora

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/12/2013 4:51:00 AM

Loved the dedication and your humble spirit! Keep on doing what you Lucilla... there will always be someone who appreciates it! :)

Therese Bacha

Date: 4/11/2013 8:11:00 PM

Dear Lucy, loved everything about what`s in your heart. I love the idea to . Terry Love xoxoxo Got a 7 >>>>

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/11/2013 6:05:00 PM

You describe her perfectly, she is so very special! BTW Lucilla, your hats are amazing, just love them! :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 4/11/2013 10:11:00 AM

Awww, a sweet dedication. I'm sure Vie will love it. A nice piece of poetry, Lucilla. :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/11/2013 6:28:00 AM

This is lovely! I'm sure she will be overjoyed to read it! :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/10/2013 5:48:00 PM

I know her well Lucilla, and she means a lot to many of us here on the Soup...Including me! This poem is just wonderful for her, it will mean a lot to her to read! You have written such a magnificent piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2013 5:24:00 PM

- I love it and M.R. will love it ..... surely! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/10/2013 5:07:00 PM

She will love this dedication.....and yes, she is a gem! Nicely done!!