Mystic Moon Ii

Mystic moon lit sky

Light set sea's face on fire

Ladder to heaven!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
     12 July 2017

heavenlightmoonhaiku

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M. L. Kiser

July 13, 2017 at 3:18 AM

Love this one; Favorited it; great read.

Winged Warrior

July 12, 2017 at 10:39 PM

Another fine flower from Demetrios...great haiku my friend...^WW^

Scott Thirtyseven

July 12, 2017 at 10:30 AM

Beautiful words my friend. And your picture looks serene.

Probir Gupta

July 12, 2017 at 7:42 AM

Lovely ladder indeed ... To heaven or to cloud nine a debate very saline ... Though your haiku sounds fine ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 12, 2017 at 7:51 AM

How clever! I have to comment on your comment dear, Probir! Thank you my friend!

Maria Williams

July 12, 2017 at 7:01 AM

It really does look like its on fire. A wonderful Haiku Dearest Friend Demetrios. Thanks for sharing...Maria

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 12, 2017 at 7:37 AM

Would I lie to you dear, Maria? It was my inspiration observing the light of the moon upon the serene waters of the bay that I observed for hours! Thank you my friend!