Mystic Moon Ii

Mystic moon lit sky

Light set sea's face on fire

Ladder to heaven!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
     12 July 2017

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/13/2017 3:18:00 AM

Love this one; Favorited it; great read.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/12/2017 10:39:00 PM

Another fine flower from Demetrios...great haiku my friend...^WW^

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/12/2017 10:30:00 AM

Beautiful words my friend. And your picture looks serene.

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/12/2017 7:42:00 AM

Lovely ladder indeed ... To heaven or to cloud nine a debate very saline ... Though your haiku sounds fine ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/12/2017 7:51:00 AM

How clever! I have to comment on your comment dear, Probir! Thank you my friend!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/12/2017 7:01:00 AM

It really does look like its on fire. A wonderful Haiku Dearest Friend Demetrios. Thanks for sharing...Maria

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/12/2017 7:37:00 AM

Would I lie to you dear, Maria? It was my inspiration observing the light of the moon upon the serene waters of the bay that I observed for hours! Thank you my friend!