Mystic Maroon Moon

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09/23/24

    Mystic maroon Moon mesmerizing me 
        sending mild rays on my way back to home at night.
      Haply  descent crescent Moon descended 
         to glow as a torch showing light
            above twenty feed above head.

        Neither dream nor illusion :
        Me perplexed in bizarre condition 
        through conscious confusion 
         Moon rays dazzled ! I was forced to close eye tight.
          Tree at gate slapped me with long leaf.
            Wished te enter home to get relief.

            Surprised most being curious :
            Moon now shinning, turning bigger ghostly gibbous 
           and winked at me : I was about to swoon.
             But soon Moon just vanished !

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/23/2024 11:01:00 AM

Great poem that explores the relationship between you and the moon, portraying the moon as a mystical and captivating presence that induces a sense of confusion and wonder.