Mystic Charm of Spring (Rhymed Tanka)
Mystic charm of spring
In the thirsty souls of trees
Wine drips, whilst birds sing
Then runs down the lovely knees
Sips the smell of winter spell
Note:
Oops, I broke
the rules of Tanka,
is it ok?...lol!
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