Mystic Beauty

oh the music of your tune,
Makes everything so immune,
Even it's a silence code,
Yet it's your best antidote.

You make the rainbow sings,
With every move you swings,
Could you be so that beautiful,
With hymns and beams so bountiful.

The bubbles of air you've made,
Determine your happiness in fate,
For your passionate is in the air,
Make one's serenity clear and dear.

The magnificent flows you've shown,
Took everyone's precious breath away,
Colorful enigma that looks beyond,  
Shows your loves never betray.

Thousands of charisma you've run,
Reminds us life's meaning and the fun ,
Your mystic beauty just like the sun,
Always treasured even it's gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gregory Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:31 PM
There are some that arent touch by music I am I am not one. Love reading this piece. Nice
Chen Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 12:31 AM
I enjoy reading this poem. It's beautiful. I intend to analyze this poem as one of my report in my literature class. Can you please give me a brief background about yourself, so that I can introduce you to my classmate.
Poet Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 12:36 AM
Beautiful!Congrats on your featured poem.To see your Avatar I had to tilt my head towards left almost 90 degree:)
Tan Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 6:59 PM
Thank you Kash!,,,Hope you didn't hurt your neck ,,,hehe
Brown Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Melanie. Love, Carol
Tan Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 7:05 PM
Good morning from Malaysia!Thank you Carol!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 5:35 AM
Very nice write here!!
Tan Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Thank you,Pace,,,,
Grisetti Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 7:33 PM
Welcome to PS. Your peom has some good images, I enjoyed reading this tonight.
Tan Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 7:56 PM
Glad you enjoy it Joann..Cheers!
Palmer Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 6:39 AM
beautiful,like it Melanie,welcome to the Soup
Tan Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 6:44 AM
Thank you,Richard..more to learn thou..i am just a beginner for this,,( ^,^ )
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