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Mystery of the Triangle

Such a legend in these dark waters born Of ships and people vanished without a trace Broken vessels bobbing along so forlorn Everything sucked beneath the ocean surface This mystery of the Atlantic is often pondered Scholars and skeptics have discussed at length What's become of these boats that have wandered Into the wild blue sea losing their strength Some have questioned how the waters may part Taking human lives somewhere to the brink Rumors even abound of Amelia Earhart Along with her plane disappearing into the drink Legend or factual truth we may never know This Bermuda Triangle tale may always revolve Around speculation that fascinates us so It's seemingly a mystery we'll never solve

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/12/2011 11:21:00 AM
I loved this poem, Deb, but Amelia Earhart crashed in the Pacific Ocean, not the Atlantic. This historical inaccuracy is the only reason your poem did not place in the Legends Contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:09:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this creative work..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 4/8/2011 8:15:00 PM
You have a great write on the Bermuda Triangle here Deb. The disappearances of boats and planes there have always fascinated me. Amelia Earhart's plane went down in the Pacific near Howland Island though. I recently saw the biographical movie on her life and death. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:13:00 AM
what really lies beyond the unknown is a mystery, deb... a really intriquing and beautiful piece that makes me reflect about the puzzles of the world... lovely! :) huggs, nette
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