Mystery of a Dead Child

Pardoned through the postmortem black
The green air like gas driving through
The dense flakes laid on my head.

My body lay heavy with the sunken Red Sea.
My clearness clear all eyes, I feel nothing now,
Not the vivacious flashes of a Summer Lady

Nor the rowdy screams of children at funerals.
My body lay cold, cold as a ferret’s nose,
I could hear it scream through pale October.

And all I remember in the weary twilight:
The seat belt clamped against my silent heart
My body threw itself from the vigor of metals,

Your hell widens to the flush of my form
And I felt my psyche evaporate in the clear air
Flashes of red and blue tango perfumery against the senseless black.

And all I remember in the weary twilight
Was a slim light calling my concealed name… I answered.
The red and blue steadily vanished in the blackness.

I watch my numb body lay flat on silver
Piecing together the weary twilight of red and blue
And shutting doors, though dead stiff, it was nothing new.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bankson Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 5:08 AM
Great imagery and congrats,you have a new fan
Bailey Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Thank you JB.
Kimathi Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Greetings Marcus. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest, with this splendid piece!! ;-)
Bailey Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Teddy K.
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Well done Marcus, congratulations...
Bailey Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Thank you so much.
Negron Flores Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Congratulations Marcus on the first placement of the Mystery contest. A 7.
Bailey Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 6:36 PM
And thank you again for placing me first in your contest. You gave this young 18 year old a whale of confidence :)
Bailey Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Thank you so much, I appreciate it.
Y. Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 4:57 PM
WoW! Marcus, You penned a deep mysterious write. I was hooked to every line. You took your reader on a journey and I'm still cluess to what happened. Excellent job! Congrats on your top win it was well deserved. A enormous seven:-) Alexis
Bailey Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 6:33 PM
I cannot express how grateful I am for this sweet comment. Thank you so much Alexis :)
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