Mystery of a Dead Child

Pardoned through the postmortem black
The green air like gas driving through
The dense flakes laid on my head.

My body lay heavy with the sunken Red Sea.
My clearness clear all eyes, I feel nothing now,
Not the vivacious flashes of a Summer Lady

Nor the rowdy screams of children at funerals.
My body lay cold, cold as a ferret’s nose,
I could hear it scream through pale October.

And all I remember in the weary twilight:
The seat belt clamped against my silent heart
My body threw itself from the vigor of metals,

Your hell widens to the flush of my form
And I felt my psyche evaporate in the clear air
Flashes of red and blue tango perfumery against the senseless black.

And all I remember in the weary twilight
Was a slim light calling my concealed name… I answered.
The red and blue steadily vanished in the blackness.

I watch my numb body lay flat on silver
Piecing together the weary twilight of red and blue
And shutting doors, though dead stiff, it was nothing new.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/27/2016 5:08:00 AM
Great imagery and congrats,you have a new fan
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Marcus Bailey
Date: 7/27/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thank you JB.
Date: 7/7/2016 4:11:00 PM
Greetings Marcus. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest, with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Marcus Bailey
Date: 7/7/2016 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Teddy K.
Date: 7/6/2016 9:59:00 PM
Well done Marcus, congratulations...
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Marcus Bailey
Date: 7/7/2016 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 7/6/2016 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations Marcus on the first placement of the Mystery contest. A 7.
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Marcus Bailey
Date: 7/6/2016 6:36:00 PM
And thank you again for placing me first in your contest. You gave this young 18 year old a whale of confidence :)
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Marcus Bailey
Date: 7/6/2016 6:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, I appreciate it.
Date: 7/6/2016 4:57:00 PM
WoW! Marcus, You penned a deep mysterious write. I was hooked to every line. You took your reader on a journey and I'm still cluess to what happened. Excellent job! Congrats on your top win it was well deserved. A enormous seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/6/2016 6:33:00 PM
I cannot express how grateful I am for this sweet comment. Thank you so much Alexis :)
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