Mystery Iii

Furred bodies come to build their home
with logs and twigs
creating a dry cavern under water
while above wispy lace designs
strong enough to catch a fly
swing in a soft breeze.
Within a cave
others hang upside down all day
suddenly to appear
in flight at night
without any wings
while out in the sea
gargantuan bulldozer mouths
open to siphon lilliputian krill.
From chaos
(and a moment of whimsy)
come Aardvark and Platypus
to join Beaver, Spider, Bat and Whale
with millions of other
figments of a super consciousness
in a dance of life and death
out from the ether
surrounding this blue place in space
spinning through
winds that roar
in a deafening silence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dvorkis Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 5:05 PM
fun theme, chaos of life and death and nature. I've written about it quite a bit and it never really gets clearer. but then you can always blame the super consciousness, the one that knows how to point a bird south for the winter and tell it to fly for 3,000 miles and then stop and turn around and fly north. I agree, something is telling that bird what to do and calling it 'instinct' doesn't feel comprehensive enough. therein lies the Mystery. 3 down 2 left. I'll get to 'em soon;) -Yoni
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 31, 2008 at 3:09 PM
A fish was swimming with his eyes closed and ran into a brick wall. The fish said "DAM." Nothing matches the abilities that nature provides. Vince
Jordan Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 4:38 AM
Sue - When it comes to nature we know what animals can and are capable of but as you said have no idea "How" - It's all far to great for us to comprehend - great poem - God Bless
Winter Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 10:47 AM
Well, now that you mention it, it is quite a bizarre mystery. Almost way too much to truly comprehend, but completely fascinating and gloriously wonderful! Amazing how it all works together, for the most part, anyway. A well written mystery of the beauty we call life here on earth, which is in space, which is...? Mystery III! : ) Loved it Sue! Love, Shar
Toran Avatar
October 26, 2008 at 5:44 PM
A great free verse! Very descriptive and visual. Thanks for the kind sentiments on my blog. Your friend, Milt
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