Mystery Ii

Ancient beyond knowing, spirals of information float in on a frothy tide. With shades of the rainbow the whelk shell preens enclosing its gastropod guest. Where did they meet to become this symbiotic star of eons before mind?

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John Loving Iii

Date: 10/19/2008 12:43:00 PM

cosmic in range but the spiral is the right ideal to have on existence. john

Deneen White

Date: 10/16/2008 5:43:00 PM

a mysterious and quaint write take care D-nyce

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/16/2008 5:35:00 AM

Excellent, excellent, excellent - this has everything I love within, truth, nature, God, and thought...and of course, poetry! LOVE this, well done! Kristin

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 10/15/2008 2:39:00 PM

Hi Sue, short, sweet and "full"....... lovely ! I shall post all my poems under "free verse".. to be honest I just write, I learnt years ago in art school that the study of art ( in this case writing ) can be detrimental; so I prefer just to write... this is no criticism of those who unlike me are not lazy..... but I will brave any critique... and stand on my individuality... Da Vinci was just a painter until the critics came................

Michael Torres

Date: 10/15/2008 11:27:00 AM

Deep thought and vision. Great write. Michael