Mystery Fish

eager eyes watch the float jump
tradition passed from elders
this year could be different
rad meter training




08/25/13
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Phillips Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 6:31 AM
So who or what is that mystery fish? man or beast? I hope you would have continued a little further. Nice work.
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 2:32 PM
Interesting work..Not sure exactly what it is about..I guess it must be an unusual fish that the elders could not have possibly know about..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Anglesey Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 12:15 PM
It's either an intense swimming session or a nice day fishing...either way I stopped to ponder the lovely verse :)
Guzzi Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 2:53 PM
ut oh radiation? I worked more on Aflame Jim I think it's even better reversed ..yikes! Check again please? XXXOO L & L
Chircop Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Hi Jimbo..always so happy to read your verses and to hear you sending your regards ..and reading online..Its pure joy! : )
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