Mystery Fish

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/27/2013 6:31:00 AM

So who or what is that mystery fish? man or beast? I hope you would have continued a little further. Nice work.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2013 2:32:00 PM

Interesting work..Not sure exactly what it is about..I guess it must be an unusual fish that the elders could not have possibly know about..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/26/2013 12:15:00 PM

It's either an intense swimming session or a nice day fishing...either way I stopped to ponder the lovely verse :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/25/2013 2:53:00 PM

ut oh radiation? I worked more on Aflame Jim I think it's even better reversed ..yikes! Check again please? XXXOO L & L

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/25/2013 9:09:00 AM

Hi Jimbo..always so happy to read your verses and to hear you sending your regards ..and reading online..Its pure joy! : )