Mysteriously She Moves

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in sun drenched noon lost in light smiling gently to herself she is on the path of pinks with their clove like scent tanagers and scarlet birds come to the midday calling but she is off to somewhere flowers in her hand

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/12/2021 8:03:00 PM

Definitely a hint of mysterious mystique in the air here, Evelyn. Nicely done. Joy and Light, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/12/2021 9:10:00 PM

You have my heartfelt thanks for your supportive words, Gershon. Summer Smiles, Evelyn

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2021 10:47:00 PM

All colors are bautiful and you use them well. Lovely poem with a hit of a mystery. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/12/2021 10:46:00 AM

I love to create mystery in poems. It allows one to imagine so many things. Thank you very much. :=)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/11/2021 5:27:00 PM

You, poetess, paint a lovely picture with your words!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/11/2021 6:13:00 PM

I love color, Kim, so it is joy to be called a painter! I extend my heartfelt thanks. :=)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2021 4:24:00 PM

I love the casualness of this part " she is off to somewhere" Wow! Fun!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/11/2021 4:29:00 PM

I love mystery in my poems. Thank you for a wonderful comment. :=)