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Mysteriously She Moves

in sun drenched noon lost in light
smiling gently to herself
she is on the path of pinks
with their clove like scent

tanagers and scarlet birds
come to the midday calling
but she is off to somewhere
flowers in her hand
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Wolf Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 8:03 PM
Definitely a hint of mysterious mystique in the air here, Evelyn. Nicely done. Joy and Light, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 9:10 PM
You have my heartfelt thanks for your supportive words, Gershon. Summer Smiles, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 10:47 PM
All colors are bautiful and you use them well. Lovely poem with a hit of a mystery. ~~
Buehler Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 10:46 AM
I love to create mystery in poems. It allows one to imagine so many things. Thank you very much. :=)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 5:27 PM
You, poetess, paint a lovely picture with your words!
Buehler Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 6:13 PM
I love color, Kim, so it is joy to be called a painter! I extend my heartfelt thanks. :=)
Krutsinger Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 4:24 PM
I love the casualness of this part " she is off to somewhere" Wow! Fun!
Buehler Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 4:29 PM
I love mystery in my poems. Thank you for a wonderful comment. :=)
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