Mysterious Stones

They line up on the shallow river,
to give Way.......


Name: Teddy Kimathi

Contest: JUST TEN WORDS

Date: 09/04/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 1:23 AM
brilliant take on the theme of stones. congrats on a fine win, teddy
Kimathi Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 2:06 AM
Thanks for your applause and morale Dr. Ram Mehta!
A  Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Lovely win Teddy.............SKAT
Kimathi Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Thanks for your kind applause Skat! <3 <3 ^_^
Dietrich Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 4:37 PM
I love how you made the picture of the stepping stone path with your entry. Congrats for your win.
Kimathi Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 11:55 PM
Thanks a lot for your kind applause Andrea! <3 <3 <3 ^_^
Callus Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 1:28 PM
short but sweet...a stepping stone to a merited win. // paul
Kimathi Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Thanks Mr. Paul. The stones took me to a victorious destination. lol.
Walker  Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 1:11 PM
Teddy, nice... very nice.. Congratulations on your winning in just ten words contest. Verlena
Kimathi Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 12:17 AM
I am grateful for your wonderful applause. Thanks Verlena! <3 <3 <3 ^_^
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 1:09 PM
- A poem about STONES in just 10 words - not easy - but it was a lot of good poems nevertheless - Congratulations on your winning poem, Teddy !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 12:18 AM
Thank you so much for your sweet and kind applause Anne Lise! <3 <3 <3 ^_^
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