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Mysterious Night Sky

As we stand looking up from planet Earth observing Milky Way so many stars some fade, die, some gracefully dance with mirth, our moon reflects, shines bright, silhouettes mars Through eyes full of doubt, curiosity seduced by such beauty of the unknown Universe so diverse, infinity that's Unexplored, is Pluto our milestone or could humanity be just destined to isolation like Jupiter tombed, Venus no saviour, no hope that's combined, Planet Earth our home though it may be doomed, mysterious night sky with your treasures supplying us with hardships and pleasures. Composed:- 7th May 2017 Mysterious night

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Date: 6/19/2017 1:27:00 PM
Don't worry about form my friend...we are here to change the landscape of poetry...the final message is what counts...beautiful job Roy...god bless...^WW^
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/19/2017 4:11:00 PM
Thank you very much WW, I do seem to concern myself due to presenting my work to such accomplished poets on PS, thanks again for your very kind comment, Roy, :))
Date: 5/9/2017 6:02:00 PM
Hey well done roy I struggle with this form I think you did a great job:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/10/2017 4:08:00 AM
Thanks Jan, as usual I'm never sure if I have got it right and it's a relief to get a comment from an accomplished poet as you, thanks again for your support and encouragement. Roy. :))

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