Mysterious Dream

My bed felt like a zareba, hedging me in as I dreamt.
I had no mirror in which to peek, but I feared I was unkempt.

I watched the dream unfolding through my transparent lids.
I perceived myself as admirable, serving food to mate and kids.

Our residence seemed to be a cave, some of you would call a hovel.
The only tools that were in sight, was a prehistoric shovel.

The distant monolith I recognized as an Egyptian pyramid.
The leaders did not build them, their enslaved prisoners did.

They had not yet been invaded, all their bounty was intact.
I don't know how I knew this but I knew it was a fact.

My dream had started fading, though I wanted it to stay.
My lost ones were still with me on that prehistoric day.

I wanted so to hold them, my precious husband and my son.
I prayed the dream would be returning when another day was done.

2/26/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/4/2014 4:14:00 PM
Wonderful win Joyce..... SKAT
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Date: 3/3/2014 3:34:00 PM
love your creativity the rhyming was excelent as well as kept me entertained while i read.
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Date: 3/2/2014 1:54:00 PM
Fine magic of your creativity with beautiful words. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Date: 3/1/2014 12:01:00 PM
Soul groups will come together time and time again, is a concept of people who believe in reincarnation, where soul mates or good friends have come together in many lives, as a continuance of your learning. Such meetings are often accompanied by an instant feeling of recognition, and even families frequently come together and strong bonds are always present. That's what the dream sounds like to me. HUGS!
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:04:00 AM
We do have them again in dreams yes! Have you ever heard of soul groups Joyce? Light & Love
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Date: 3/1/2014 1:09:00 AM
this is very creative, JOyce. Nice to see you on this winners list tonight. Congrats to you.
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:06:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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Date: 2/27/2014 3:36:00 PM
It had to be a winner...congratulations
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Date: 2/27/2014 2:33:00 PM
love this fascinating write, Joyce. I can hardly ever recall my dreams, but I hope mine are as interesting as yours. Hope you're feeling well and having a great week xx
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Date: 2/27/2014 11:13:00 AM
Very meanful winning work..Congrats on your great win..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/27/2014 8:39:00 AM
Wow Joyce. This is surely a winner for me. To see myself in your words helps me be part of universe, love, Kathy
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Date: 2/27/2014 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the write on the Dreams, joyce
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Date: 2/27/2014 3:12:00 AM
hi Joyce great use of all the words congrats on placing ty for entering hugs
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Date: 2/26/2014 7:27:00 PM
This contest wasn't easy......those words were challenging!! You met the mark !! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 2/26/2014 5:59:00 PM
Wow what a beautiful read...good luck in the competition Huberta
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