Mysterious Cyan

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Written: December 16, 2023
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I sneak glance at veiled blue.
as swank stars start  to shine,
Sleeping, I sensed your love.
as warmth weaves through the heart,
Feeling the night above

I sneak glance at veiled blue.
through days that caught the moon,
with the whim that soon grasps
those who were backing me,
lasting the same long clasp

I sneak glance at veiled blue.
then climb the heights of sky.
zest the bright stars that shine.
Through the twilight impulse.
glimpse that my soul is thine.

I sneak glance at veiled blue.
Oh, divine timeless throne.
Your love has embraced us.
through my path shone a blaze.
freed and borne with life fuss.

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Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 12/27/2023 2:19:00 PM

Respect! Applause!. I can feel the passion on every written word on this magnificent poem. Love for nature and life. The picture is very well chosen too. Your voice to go with makes it unique. A fav+

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/17/2023 7:07:00 AM

Dear Sotto, this is such an impeccably crafted poem, beautifully highlighting the elegance and healing powers of the shade 'blue'.. Ahh, I love everything about colours in a poem and this one just holds a different magical dimension with its scenic imageries and vivid depth.. There are so many gorgeous lines that left me awestruck "warmth weaves through the heart", "through days that caught the moon", "Through the twilight impulse", "divine timeless throne" Woww, just so whimsical :)