Mysterious Cyan

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Written: December 16, 2023 _____________________________________ I sneak glance at veiled blue. as swank stars start to shine, Sleeping, I sensed your love. as warmth weaves through the heart, Feeling the night above I sneak glance at veiled blue. through days that caught the moon, with the whim that soon grasps those who were backing me, lasting the same long clasp I sneak glance at veiled blue. then climb the heights of sky. zest the bright stars that shine. Through the twilight impulse. glimpse that my soul is thine. I sneak glance at veiled blue. Oh, divine timeless throne. Your love has embraced us. through my path shone a blaze. freed and borne with life fuss.

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Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 12/27/2023 2:19:00 PM

Respect! Applause!. I can feel the passion on every written word on this magnificent poem. Love for nature and life. The picture is very well chosen too. Your voice to go with makes it unique. A fav+

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/17/2023 7:07:00 AM

Dear Sotto, this is such an impeccably crafted poem, beautifully highlighting the elegance and healing powers of the shade 'blue'.. Ahh, I love everything about colours in a poem and this one just holds a different magical dimension with its scenic imageries and vivid depth.. There are so many gorgeous lines that left me awestruck "warmth weaves through the heart", "through days that caught the moon", "Through the twilight impulse", "divine timeless throne" Woww, just so whimsical :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/17/2023 4:43:00 AM

beautiful verse, and a beautiful pic to go with it..this colour is so soothing and healing to me

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/16/2023 4:41:00 PM

your poem, dear Sotta, is one I'd describe as elegant...superb images with emotions tied to those images. "Veiled blue" is a lovely way of describing a soft blue sky. I appreciate your love for nature, especially the timeless sky....a wonderful love affair you've described so eloquently. Have to fave this one...have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas

Paige Hind

Date: 12/16/2023 1:23:00 PM

So beautiful, a fav for me!

Silent One

Date: 12/16/2023 11:23:00 AM

You honoured the colour blue so well here.. your poem is full of imagery and is full of sweet words, especially that last stanza my friend..