Mysterious Beauty

My priceless jewel, within the face of Heaven, 
That precious light that shines within Loves' rippled Soul. 
My beloved, lead me to the throne of Love divine. 
Hearts meld together, one heart In blessed peace, 
Brown eyes In their sublimity drown within mine. 
One heart, one Soul In dreams perfection, 
Loves' emotions dwell In Soul divine, 
Above, the rainbow of the heart awakes. 
To an Angel who pens with a quill golden, 
Awakening treasure bounties hidden In deep sands. 
To hear the seagull cry out In dreams' pearl drop. 
To hear the lonely call of a wolf, under a cold moon howling, 
Where stars forever glitter silver In dews dance, fingers of light 
Under the feast of each silver face, beauty beams. 
Always we are awaiting that special someones return. 

A collaboration by Liam Mc'daid and Michael Clarke.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bocsa Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 2:15 PM
Wonderful walks in beauty to which I `d like to return...
Mcdaid Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 2:55 PM
thank you ovidiu truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Anderson Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 9:00 PM
Liam, just lovely. Love the details. Meg
Anderson Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:41 AM
Liam, your very welcome!
Mcdaid Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:09 AM
so sweet of you meg thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Deschler Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 1:54 PM
I had no idea that this was a collaboration until the very end, which is always a good sign of excellent team work... I truly enjoyed this beautiful poem written by two of my favorite poets! Well done to you both!
Mcdaid Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:08 AM
smiling kelly truly heartfelt outstanding beautiful comment bless you dear friend
Yvonne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 9:23 PM
A brilliant colab by once again two great poets. Congratulations on being honored by your poem being chosen as poem of the day.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:06 AM
thank you so kindly maurice for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Roper Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Liam and Michael, well done, congrats been chosen as the Poem Of The Day. :) blessings to both of you eve
Mcdaid Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:33 PM
thank you eve wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Beauty in every line! Congrats to both of you for being chosen TPOD!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:31 PM
rhonda thank you kindly dear friend truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:00 PM
My dearest friend Liam, congrats are in order to you and Mike for having your very beautiful poem here been chosen as the Poem Of The Day. You surely deserved it for such a romantic love rendition masterpiece! A 7 for you and another for Mike! Enjoy your day! :) Love and hugs! ^o^xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 10:36 AM
thank you dorian for the heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend you have a great day bless you
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 2:19 PM
two of the most romantic writers together in perfect harmony... awesome write my friends congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xxx
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 8:55 AM
ah thank you jan dear friend your so sweet wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated pal
Mcdaid Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 12:17 PM
One to reread. I am struck by somewhat unique metaphors and imagery and the use of the capitalised "In" at each use suggests another layer.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 6:09 AM
perry thank you ever so much dear friend for the truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Meade Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 11:28 AM
You guys rock -- love masters! Congrats
Mcdaid Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 6:41 PM
thank you kindly david dear friend heartfelt wonderful comment bless you
Armstrong Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 11:14 AM
A very beautiful and moving verse- it creates a picture of supreme happiness in a very wonderful way. Congratulations to you both
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 6:17 AM
thank you brian very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day Liam and Michael. Well done!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 6:09 AM
thank you brenda deeply truly wonder comment greatly appreciated dear friend
Andresen Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 5:32 AM
- A pleasure to see this as P.O.T.D !!!!! - CONGRATULATIONS, dear Liam & Mike !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:20 PM
joel thank you kindly for the very beautiful deeply appreciated
Thornton Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 3:45 AM
Nice.. Very good.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 6:04 PM
thank you joel for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Devnath  Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 2:41 PM
beautiful collaboration and done well. loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Mcdaid Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 4:58 PM
thank you bl truly wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Dunn Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 12:49 PM
Liam thanks for your comment on my snow dust I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, love this work of passion of yours it's creepy but it does have a sad beauty to it none the same. cheri
Mcdaid Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 4:55 PM
it was a very beautiful read as all your pieces cheryl thank you kindly wonderful comment that's the mystery beauty of love never fades
Carroll Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 12:15 PM
Well done Liam..Nice collaboration!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 4:51 PM
all right pal all buddies here mike will be delighted ken thank you kindly bless you
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Hi Liam! My dear friend this is a very beautiful, and very romantic collaboration between you and Mike! Very Dazzling write! Enjoyed the love poem! A 7 for you and another for Mike! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 4:48 PM
thank you dorian dear friend wonderful comment mike will be delighted bless you deeply appreciated
Andresen Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 7:55 AM
- A collaboration with two romantics talented poets! - Really beautiful Liam & Mike - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 8:30 AM
thank you anne lise our words just melted together wonderful comment dear pal bless you
Meade Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 6:37 PM
Well done my friends . . . your lines create such powerful images of longing for another. I hear the wolf calling.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 8:21 AM
smiling that old wolf has spent many winters alone me and mike we know that frozen teardrop to well only holds love lol wonderful comment mike he sweet talked all over my words, thank you pal bless you
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