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Mysterious Beauty

My priceless jewel, within the face of Heaven, That precious light that shines within Loves' rippled Soul. My beloved, lead me to the throne of Love divine. Hearts meld together, one heart In blessed peace, Brown eyes In their sublimity drown within mine. One heart, one Soul In dreams perfection, Loves' emotions dwell In Soul divine, Above, the rainbow of the heart awakes. To an Angel who pens with a quill golden, Awakening treasure bounties hidden In deep sands. To hear the seagull cry out In dreams' pearl drop. To hear the lonely call of a wolf, under a cold moon howling, Where stars forever glitter silver In dews dance, fingers of light Under the feast of each silver face, beauty beams. Always we are awaiting that special someones return. A collaboration by Liam Mc'daid and Michael Clarke.

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Date: 12/9/2014 2:15:00 PM
Wonderful walks in beauty to which I `d like to return...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/9/2014 2:55:00 PM
thank you ovidiu truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 12/4/2014 9:00:00 PM
Liam, just lovely. Love the details. Meg
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Meg Anderson
Date: 12/9/2014 10:41:00 AM
Liam, your very welcome!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/9/2014 10:09:00 AM
so sweet of you meg thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 11/30/2014 1:54:00 PM
I had no idea that this was a collaboration until the very end, which is always a good sign of excellent team work... I truly enjoyed this beautiful poem written by two of my favorite poets! Well done to you both!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/9/2014 10:08:00 AM
smiling kelly truly heartfelt outstanding beautiful comment bless you dear friend
Date: 11/25/2014 9:23:00 PM
A brilliant colab by once again two great poets. Congratulations on being honored by your poem being chosen as poem of the day.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/9/2014 10:06:00 AM
thank you so kindly maurice for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/25/2014 4:58:00 PM
Liam and Michael, well done, congrats been chosen as the Poem Of The Day. :) blessings to both of you eve
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/29/2014 11:33:00 PM
thank you eve wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 3:16:00 PM
Beauty in every line! Congrats to both of you for being chosen TPOD!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/29/2014 11:31:00 PM
rhonda thank you kindly dear friend truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 11/25/2014 3:00:00 PM
My dearest friend Liam, congrats are in order to you and Mike for having your very beautiful poem here been chosen as the Poem Of The Day. You surely deserved it for such a romantic love rendition masterpiece! A 7 for you and another for Mike! Enjoy your day! :) Love and hugs! ^o^xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 10:36:00 AM
thank you dorian for the heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend you have a great day bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 2:19:00 PM
two of the most romantic writers together in perfect harmony... awesome write my friends congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 8:55:00 AM
ah thank you jan dear friend your so sweet wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated pal
Date: 11/25/2014 12:17:00 PM
One to reread. I am struck by somewhat unique metaphors and imagery and the use of the capitalised "In" at each use suggests another layer.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 6:09:00 AM
perry thank you ever so much dear friend for the truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/25/2014 11:28:00 AM
You guys rock -- love masters! Congrats
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/27/2014 6:41:00 PM
thank you kindly david dear friend heartfelt wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 11:14:00 AM
A very beautiful and moving verse- it creates a picture of supreme happiness in a very wonderful way. Congratulations to you both
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/26/2014 6:17:00 AM
thank you brian very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 11/25/2014 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day Liam and Michael. Well done!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/26/2014 6:09:00 AM
thank you brenda deeply truly wonder comment greatly appreciated dear friend
Date: 11/25/2014 5:32:00 AM
- A pleasure to see this as P.O.T.D !!!!! - CONGRATULATIONS, dear Liam & Mike !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 3:20:00 PM
joel thank you kindly for the very beautiful deeply appreciated
Date: 11/25/2014 3:45:00 AM
Nice.. Very good.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/27/2014 6:04:00 PM
thank you joel for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 11/24/2014 2:41:00 PM
beautiful collaboration and done well. loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/24/2014 4:58:00 PM
thank you bl truly wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 11/24/2014 12:49:00 PM
Liam thanks for your comment on my snow dust I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, love this work of passion of yours it's creepy but it does have a sad beauty to it none the same. cheri
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/24/2014 4:55:00 PM
it was a very beautiful read as all your pieces cheryl thank you kindly wonderful comment that's the mystery beauty of love never fades
Date: 11/24/2014 12:15:00 PM
Well done Liam..Nice collaboration!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/24/2014 4:51:00 PM
all right pal all buddies here mike will be delighted ken thank you kindly bless you
Date: 11/24/2014 9:00:00 AM
Hi Liam! My dear friend this is a very beautiful, and very romantic collaboration between you and Mike! Very Dazzling write! Enjoyed the love poem! A 7 for you and another for Mike! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/24/2014 4:48:00 PM
thank you dorian dear friend wonderful comment mike will be delighted bless you deeply appreciated
Date: 11/24/2014 7:55:00 AM
- A collaboration with two romantics talented poets! - Really beautiful Liam & Mike - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/24/2014 8:30:00 AM
thank you anne lise our words just melted together wonderful comment dear pal bless you
Date: 11/23/2014 6:37:00 PM
Well done my friends . . . your lines create such powerful images of longing for another. I hear the wolf calling.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/24/2014 8:21:00 AM
smiling that old wolf has spent many winters alone me and mike we know that frozen teardrop to well only holds love lol wonderful comment mike he sweet talked all over my words, thank you pal bless you

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