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Myself Wall

Your someone with no soul Not even a little bit of humanity...no not at all You don't have a heart except the heart that you had stole I can see your body living without a heart I can see you drowning, I can see you falling apart Your someone from the stone age An animal which needs to stay in his cage A killer with black blood His face is covered by mud You are my nightmare Who's teaching me not to care And I don't feel strong enough to face it and this ain't fair I'm trying to clean up your face to know who you are Your so close to me , your not that far I brought to you the mirror so you can see your self After I knew who you are I hoped if it was someone's else The reflection shows that I'm the beast which is holding my soul No one is standing in my way exibt myself wall

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Justin Bordner

Date: 3/9/2016 2:30:00 AM

There is a beast that knows us all, a heart eater, a clawing madness that will shred the soul, hate is it's instinct, suffering it's appetite...you get so raw and confrontational in this poem Dalia, and the face is so well colored and defined, powerful imagery! The way you finish this poem with such clear self awareness is awesome my Violet Poetess..J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 3/9/2016 7:40:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear for this beautiful comment , you know how to play with words like a little toy whether in poetry or in lovely comments as this , much appreciated, hugs / / :)

White Sage

Date: 1/22/2016 7:52:00 AM

there's always that dark side of the soul, just as Vladislav's said...the words are touching

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/22/2016 11:30:00 PM

Yes there is , we all have 2 sides just like life , thank you very much my dear for ur sweet comment, I appreciate it ,hugs / / :)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/22/2016 11:30:00 PM

Yes there is , we all have 2 sides just like life , thank you very much my dear for ur sweet comment, I appreciate it ,hugs / / :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/10/2016 7:53:00 PM

We all have that dark side which we must show now and again in what we write Dalia. We show it in different ways as we try to let out the feelings. You have done so well in this piece. You do not seem afraid to reach within your inner self and touch the darker side. As i say this is not a bad thing. A seven for taking the time to explore this side. Now it is time to come out and play before the moon. Hugs....Vladislav

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 9:18:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear for ur supportive and thoughtful words , it's much appreciated, as I appreciate your delightful, pleasing visit, hugs / / :)